@grcr
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @elishavet-pidyon @hybridlore @anyone-interested…
A new chapter. Quite short, actually.
CHAPTER 1
March 4, 2016
Walt Jefferson XXIII was not a stranger to the government or their meetings. He knew more about the state than any boy his age. His family was prominent in Extroit. Their ancestors had a hand in the building of…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
After fifteen years of pointless plotless-ness, I’ve finally found the meaning of my book… sorta. Maybe meaning is the wrong word… a subtle message, perhaps?
anyway… heeheeheh… 🤤
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months ago
ellette-giselle
Wow!!! Love the one of the girl!!! But what is happening to poor Markus! I must know!!!
Thank yoouuuu heehee 🤍 Ah Markus… Long story with no good ending. Basically, think labs and terrible ethics.
(Hey! I have an Ira. And he’s dark haired and blue eyed. But you can’t really have an Ira that didn’t look that way) I like his drawi…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months, 1 week ago
@keilah
you are SO GOOD at art, girl. If I knew how, I’d hire you to illustrate my current WIP.
Aww thanks 🥰🤍🤍 Oah that would be cool. That… actually means a lot to me. 🤍🤍
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-GRCR- replied to the topic idk what to call this but… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 1 week ago
ooo can’t wait to read…!!
🤍🤍
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months, 1 week ago
and this one of Ira…
(I might change it a little later because im not fully happy with it, but it works for now lol XD)

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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months, 1 week ago
Markus…

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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months, 1 week ago
dumping some recent arts here…
dramatic picture of Belle Jefferson

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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months, 1 week ago
They look great! That’s an impressive project. I hope it turns out well!
Thanks!! 🤍🤍
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-GRCR- posted an update 7 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m prolly one of the worst responders ever.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
UGH! KP signed me out as I was typing! That’s a new one. *sulks*
Let’s try this again……
I’m starting to get a feel for the amount of siblings! I pick a few to keep an eye on and the rest sort of come and go. It’s like getting to know a family with a tone of kids. (which is what it is, lol)
lolol
yaaayy
Not sure what “Thok” means. This is…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
I couldn’t be bothered with hands so just ignore them.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 2 weeks ago
Okay after a long time… I have new chapterrrr heeheehee… !!
@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @anyone-interested || Tagging you three since you responded… but if you’d rather not be tagged just lmk… 😛
Also, Elishavet, I saw your other message but didn’t know what to say. I agree with what you said, and I tried to add some more de…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months, 2 weeks ago
600+? That’s… a lot of characters… You’ve got a lot of patience.
lol yeah… 😅 it never feels like that many though, when I sort them into the friend groups and families they belong in.
How long did it take you to do just those 28?
Ignoring my week-long moments of procrastination… about two days or so. I frequently forgot abo…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 7 months, 3 weeks ago
I am working on drawing all my 600+ peoples alphabetically, and I decided to start with B…for no reason in particular. I have five left.

Unfortunately it’s missing my girlie Billie because I created her after I started this… ugh.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Ah. No one “on screen” got shot, just the neighbors in the background, if that makes any sense.
😜
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I also thought it was interesting how Elia’s comment “it’s dangerous out there” put all the danger outside, so when it was followed by cozy family time, we felt safe inside. Like the Igby Cottage in WFS. Then ev…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
lol there was a space in the actual doc, I don’t know why it didn’t transfer over…
This seems a little odd, because 1. it is one of the more standard ways of swearing an oath, and 2. as a soldier he would know this from training and wouldn’t need to be told. I would say something like “swear the oath” etc. Something that tell…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
eeeee yay!! 😃 I’m pretty much open to all feedback… yeah.
(I actually thought the dad was gonna die in this chapter from scene 1…. so I’m relieved that he made it. XD)
LOL
It’s like a family I know, expect they have 15 kids and it’s all “J” names.
😅 I guess great minds think alike lolol
Yeah, it’s not vital. It probably wo…[Read more]
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-GRCR- started the topic my book again… in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months, 3 weeks ago
Hello hello hello.
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I’m rewriting TPE (I’ve renamed it to A Fire Within btw, so I’ll probably call it AFW instead) for the billionth time and I’m pretty happy with it so far, so I’m going to start sharing it again. Andddd… yeah. Tagging everyone I can think of atm, but feel free to ignore. I don’t want to bother anyone. 😅😅
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