Gracie

@aysia-serene Yeah, they had been coming out frequently (I think there are three seasons now of Race to the Edge), but since its been forever they should come out with the new season soon enough…I hope. 🙁

@aysia-serene Yeah, they had been coming out in predictability, but since its been forever they should come out with the new season soon enough…I hope. 🙁

@aysia-serene Well, I like them. The humor is awesome, and it has a fair bit of excitement and action. The only complaint I have is that I’ve been waiting for the next season for months. And I’m on a cliffhanger!!! GAH! It’s like waiting for the Shadow Throne to come out after the Runaway King’s ending.

@aysia-serene Oh, Roden. That was one of the most suspenseful scenes ever! And a 3rd movie! I can’t wait until it comes out in forever amount of years. Ugh. Have you seen any of the episodes? (Race to the Edge)

@jess

disappears in flames

That’s a new one. Cool!

@aysia-serene

Oh yeah and yay! Ascendance Trilogy! Her books inspired most of my writing. Sage is definitely the best of the two, though I haven’t read hardly any of the Mark of the Thief books. Which of the three books is your favorite? Mine is probably The Runaway King, but the False…[Read more]

@jess

disappears in flames

That’s a new one. Cool!

@aysia-serene

Oh yeah! Ascendance Trilogy! Her books inspired most of my writing. Sage is definitely the best of the two, though I haven’t read hardly any of the Mark of the Thief books. Which of the three books is your favorite? Mine is probably The Runaway King, but the False Prince is…[Read more]

No ideas. None. My brain is empty. But I shall let you know if I come up with something. *nods*

@Hope

Hmmm… Maybe you should tell Marvel they stole your idea then you can do it. 😛
To rouse the people more than just spying, maybe the government promises something more than protection. Money, protection, free cars, something they may want. They could also threaten the people to help…you know, ‘or else’ kinda thing.

@aysia-serene You like school? Yup, you’re definitely a homeschooler. I think it’s a common trait among us. That’s so funny about you’re hobbies; you sound just like me. People ask me what I like to do and I pipe up “Write!” And they ask what else and I go “Uh…” XD

Does anyone even know how the bestistest thing got started anyway?

Did you draw your avatar, by the way? I love it!

Hello @Aysia-Serene! I’ve seen you hovering around the edges here— welcome aboard. 😀 So glad you finally decided to join us. 😉 I see a lot of fantasy in your author list— is that your favorite genre? It’s mine too, though it really depends on the quality of the story. 😉 Do you ever think you’ll branch out and try something new?

Welcome again!

@aysia-serene Wait!!!!! Did you say you like Jennifer A. Nielson??? YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! Which books?
So, you sound a lot like me. Homeschooled. Laughing at your own jokes. I do too. Drawing. Awesome; I sketch. I’ve been writing to three years too!! And really, medieval based fantasy! Same! And I love cookies.
In other…[Read more]

@Northerner Haha, mine didn’t either. Except watch Tangled. I don’t know if that counts. 🙂

@Abigail-Blomberg Coolio! It’s a nice twist, doing it from Joseph’s perspective.

The main thing I think you might want to work on is the grammar in some places. Some where typos, some where just words together that didn’t quite make sense.

It isn’t perfect, but it is as perfect as I it can be for my sparrow.

This line had me a little confused a…[Read more]

Amen, @perfectfifths! Happy 2017! May it be a better year than any of it’s predecessors, may God help us to grow in faith and strength, may we ever seek Him more in the adventures He has planned for us, and may He bless our writing as we endeavor to honor His glory in the upcoming year.

@alia I’m so sorry. I’ll keep her family and all those involved in my prayers.

And yes. This is the correct way to post a critique thingy. 😉 For the forum, at least. If you wanted an excerpt critiqued by the actual staff and posted on the home page, you’d have to submit it by email as stated in the submission guidelines.

@Abigail-Blomberg I really love the idea of taking the story from Joseph’s perspective, and I love the symbolism of a songbird you chose to represent their love. Great choice. There were only a few things I noticed that actually needed work— for one, you seem to randomly switch back and forth between past tense and present tense. That can be…[Read more]

@Abigail-Rose I really love the idea of taking the story from Joseph’s perspective, and I love the symbolism of a songbird you chose to represent their love. Great choice. There were only a few things I noticed that actually needed work— for one, you seem to randomly switch back and forth between past tense and present tense. That can be…[Read more]

@AbigailRose I really love the idea of taking the story from Joseph’s perspective, and I love the symbolism of a songbird you chose to represent their love. Great choice. There were only a few things I noticed that actually needed work— for one, you seem to randomly switch back and forth between past tense and present tense. That can be…[Read more]