Gracie

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose I think we posted at the same time… 😛

I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali

@Alia Poor guardian angel. 😛
Yes, I’ll be praying.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 that is a GREAT midpoint. So right now what you’re looking for seems to be a first plot point— where Kara commits to action. What about Blake? Was he taken in the fight with the Catastrophes? Or did he use it as a distraction to infiltrate the prison and get caught or something? If that’s the case Matthias could have gotten…[Read more]

I’ve done that a little bit…the problem is I can’t think of any major plot points–at all. I know that Kara ends up being thrown out of the prison along with Matthias, and I know that should happen somewhere around the halfway point in the book, but…

Ugh. It’s so frustrating. I need specifics but no matter how hard I try I can’t come up with…[Read more]

@His-instrument YES THE TRAILER. OH HELP. HOW CAN I WAIT UNTIL DECEMBER? Also, I think there’s a topic about Rogue One somewhere. *digs it up* Oh yes, here it is. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/rogue-one/ I’m pretty sure it’s mostly @Emma-Flournoy and I ranting though… XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 perhaps you should try mapping out Kara’s arc in detail and going from there?

@Ethryndal I know. My impeccable memory and attention to detail must have failed me then. *hangs head in shame*

I was so happy to be proven incorrect though. XD

@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.

@anne-of-lothlorien I second everything @adry_grace has said. (How come these people are so good at voicing my exact opinion?) I love the ending. LOVE. And the present tense is good too. 🙂

I wasn’t brave enough to say it @kate-flournoy

Thanks! I’m glad it was a relatively easy fix. @kate-flournoy

No, I haven’t fixed my plot issues. I don’t even know where to begin with them, to be honest…

@Aratrea lol

All right @That_Writer_Girl_99 read through the document, and left a comment in one place, but otherwise you did good. 😀 You’re handling Matthias with more subtlety. *thumbs up*

Have you figured out your plot problems? Any way I can help you?

@BethanySinkyRoses welcome aboard, new KeePer! 😀 Look forward to seeing you around.

(@aratrea I hope you know that profile picture makes you impossible to take seriously. XD)

@anne-of-lothlorien *groans miserably and winces* Agh, I’m sorry, I have to leave for homeschool co-op in fifteen minutes, and there’s no way I can draw something that fast. *headdesk* I’m sorry. 🙁

@delightinlife Sure, I’ll beta-read it. Just make sure you start a separate thread for it, and don’t post it here. Otherwise, it might get lost among all the writerly ramblings. 🙂

@gideon-sowdon @dragon-snapper Oops. Um…I plead artistic license. 😀

@anne-of-lothlorien Challenge excepted.