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I’m not gonna risk editing my post. It might disappear. 😛 So, @Dragon-Snapper—see above.

@DragonSnapper Chapter titles all the way! But only if they’re good ones. Which the standard for would vary with different people. 😛 No blatant spoilers, and only titles that make sense. I love good chapter titles, but if they’re dull and irrelevant then I’d rather not see them at all. When you do have chapter titles, aside from it providing…[Read more]

@Alia, great. 😀

@ClaireC Sure thing!
Oh wait, it happened today…I haven’t been on KP the last several days. 😛 Oh well. Hope you did great!

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Oooh, not good at all. I’ll be praying.

@Ethryndal Aaaahhh! Whoa.

@Ethryndal *raises hand* I’ve read Treasure Island! Kidnapped is better though. 😉 All for Alan.

@Ethryndal child… seriously. Have some confidence in your own abilities. 😛 You explained that very well and I totally agree. Great points. I think you taught me something there. 😉 Or at least put something I’d only felt into words.

Haha, I was stalking K.M Weiland’s website the other day and actually copied this into my photos.

This makes so much more sense. I’ve never tried writing something so structured before, so I’m bound to make mistakes…ugh.

@winter-rose

Key event? What’s that? @winter-rose

Funnily enough, that doesn’t really change what I was planning on doing in future chapters. It just makes more sense now. @winter-rose

*slaps forehead* Duh, Elizabeth…

Okay. I’m making note of this for future reference. I think I definitely checked off my Inciting Event too early. Which, although it’s annoying, kinda brings everything else into clearer focus…

Can’t write about stuff that hasn’t happened yet, right?

The stuff before the first plot point. I think.

Erm, you’ve read Prison, right? If so, do you think Tam being taken is a decent enough Inciting Event? Or should I do something more drastic? @winter-rose

Here’s the thing @winter-rose –I’m stuck, but not on the plot. I have ideas. I know where I want the story to go. I just don’t know how to get there.
In the past, whenever I would get bored with a story, I’d just skip to the action, help preserve my interest. I can’t do that here, obviously, and I’m bored of just siting around, staring at my…[Read more]

Here’s the thing @winter-rose–I’m stuck, but not on the plot. I have ideas. I know where I want the story to go. I just don’t know how to get there.
In the past, whenever I would get bored with a story, I’d just skip to the action, help preserve my interest. I can’t do that here, obviously, and I’m bored of just siting around, staring at my…[Read more]

Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome)

There. @winter-rose

Gabby! Hi!

Um, okay. Probably best if we switch to my excerpt forum…let me find the link real quick… @winter-rose

I’m writing if anyone’s here. @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @winter-rose

Kate, if you’re on…I need brainstorming help. If anyone else is willing to help, I’d love to get a fresh voice in my head… *bashes skull against nearest wall*

@delightinlife Muahahaha—*chokes* Ahem. Please keep in mind that I’m not the most experienced writer, and emotions are one of the things I struggle with, so take everything I say with a grain of salt. But I am reading a book about writing emotions, so here’s what I’ve learned from it so far.

First of all, writing your own emotions into Josiah…[Read more]

@delightinlife If I can be of any help later on, I be here. 🙂

@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @audrey-caylin @daeus @kate-flournoy @ethryndal @northerner I’m editing if anyone is there.