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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
After being on KP for a little longer…I can honestly say that you did a great job with the characterization in both stories @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
Okay @graciegirl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
COFFEE @graciegirl
Hey do you happen to have my Prison google doc open?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
Kate glanced at her. “But I’m the one who brought them in.”
Another knight, Elizabeth, pulled out her wallet. “I actually have a dragon riding license.”The funny thing about this bit is that I don’t even have my regular driver’s license.
WOW @dragon-snapper you’ve done it again. This is amazing.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Suggestions in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@LifeofKatie I’ve probably told you before and @Daeus already mentioned it, but—LES MIS OF COURSE. Seriously. 😀
Read any of the Scarlet Pimpernel books?
North and South—Elizabeth Gaskell (Really good period drama. BBC’s miniseries of it is just as good.)
A Tale of Two Cities of course. 🙂
The Ball and the Cross—Chesterton
Rolf and the…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Aquila in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 3 months ago
@Leumeister Yep, anyone who volunteers, to get their email address you can email KP—Sarah Spradlin usually answers the emails—and kindly request her to facilitate an address exchange. Within the safe confines of private email. 😀
And I like to beta-read but can’t volunteer ’cause I’m WAY busy and already overbooked with beta-reading stuff…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien Ha! Great picture.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
Oh and yes @Dragon-Snapper, the Monte Cristo thing was so great.
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Mariposa Aristeo started the topic Would You Rather Writing Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
Have any of you played “Would You Rather?” I like to concoct funny “would you rather” scenarios to torture my family. Here are some I created just for us writers:
Would you rather write your novel backwards, or only be able to use words under six letters?
Would you rather have to eat every page of everything you write, or have to do a push-up…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ah yes. I had to make Stanton an evil overlord somehow. 😀
@daeus *races ice cream cone to cliche* Hurrah! (I hope you don’t mind being captured. 😀 )
@delightinlife Don’t worry! There are some coconut milk ice creams in my house too. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I LOVE IT! XD XD XD Soy ice cream. *overflowing mirth* And this one had too many awesome lines to count too. Nice job. 😀 😀 😀
(@Daeus—have some extra dairy ice cream here, with un-poisoned rasperries. *it*) -
katie replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
@dragon-snapper – Ahhh!! So exciting!! I’m currently on Part 4 (started reading late last night!) This story is absolutely wonderful!!!!!! 😀 You captured King @daeus, @kina-lamb, @kate-flournoy & @emma-flournoy so perfectly!!! 😀 Now to resume my reading…
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
Oh, and to anyone else who decides to read this and hasn’t read the 1st one, go to the first page of this topic and read that one first.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
Grr. @kina-lamb
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy kina-lamb @lifeofkatie (be sure to read the 1st one first) @jane-maree @ethryndal @aratrea @overcomer @audrey-caylin @jess @graciegirl @adry_grace @anne-swiftblade @christi-eaton @jadamae @jess @northerner @that_writer_girl_99 @perfectfifths @theliterarycrusader @hope @ingridrd @winter-rose @rolena-hatfield @cla…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
Alrighty! The moment you’ve all been waiting for!!!
The Legend of King Daeus: The Sequel
Part 1
Location: Castle RegnisIt was a dark and stormy night. Actually, it was a bright and sunny morning, but no one was sitting under a pine tree or staring at lily pads. No, they were glaring at maps, at clues, at ice cream.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
@graciegirl Raspberries are mentioned as well. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
Legend of King Daeus the Sequel Update:
I have finished writing it. I just need to edit it, then we’ll be good to go. 😀 -
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