G. B. Carter

@catwing Gotta love the humor! 😛

Hey catwing, go outline. 😉

Suddenly, a flashlight appeared out of nowhere. Jack put his hand on his head, clenching at his hair! “Goodness me! A flashlight! My requests have been answered!”

@catwing Yes! Isn’t editing so much fun!

I’m going through and killing all the telling, and making my sarcastic character ten times as snarky. It’s awesome. 😛 I’m about 16, maybe 17% through with editing. Making progress. 😀

I’ve been able to incorporate world building too, which I decided to do after I wrote the book. *hides under piles of…[Read more]

@catwing Hiya! I’m editing too!

@salome01w4g @that_writer_Girl_99 Time for dinner! Have fun with ethics and novels that don’t want to be written! 😀

@that_writer_Girl_99 That sounds…difficult. 😉

@that_writer_Girl_99 *pats shoulder*

What’s ethics?

@That_writer_Girl_99 Watcha studying?
@salome01w4g Hiya! I’m worldbuilding.

@That-writer-girl-99 Hey, you still there?

@emily @shannon @salome01w4g @daeus @catwing @daughteroftheking
I’m worldbuilding at the moment.

@michael-stanton *nods* Of course, of course…that makes sense. Poor underlings.

Rogue One is awesome too.

Guys. Just. Guys.

The never-ending discussion.

Kylo Ren is awesome.

@daeus Looks good. *thumbs up*

Kylo Ren is the worst…

@xonos-darkgrate FINALLY! Someone who agrees with me. (@kate-flournoy and @daeus think he’s awesome for some reason…) 😉

I just realized I typed “the article” instead of “this article.” *laughs at self* It makes it sound like some sort of revered, secret thing. XD

@raevynstar *grins from ear to ear because I loooove The Secret Garden* I found the article really helpful when it comes to my unlikeable characters. It might not be exactly what you’re after, but there are some good points in there. 🙂

@jess-penrose

Well, the version of a synopsis I know is a maximum of 10 page summary of a book that describes the plot, characters, message, world and the writer’s thoughts. Soooo… I assume these are slightly different things in Australia. That’s all.

That’s my definition of a synposis too…I mean, that’s a good reason for writer’s to hate…[Read more]

@daeus I agree about the last sentence/paragraph thing (and most of what the others said about rewording throughout). I don’t think the whole thing should be dumped, but particularly just the last sentence sounds sort of pushy and/or excluding or something along those lines. If you were to cut it, it might need replacing with something else, but I…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield That’s great! It’s really cute. 😀

@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.

@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.