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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
I agree with Kate. Good job all! 🙂
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@writefury Thank you, Rosey! lol! Yeah, that thought has crossed my mind. I’ll have to think about a good way to change it… Maybe I can add a footnote. “Check out John Flanagan’s “rangers”” 😀
@hope Thanks!! Gotcha, I’ll work on that. 🙂 And fabulous! I shall also follow you on the pinterest things. 🙂 (Yassssss! Hot chocolate for the win!)
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
lol! Yeah, sometimes I’ll go on a quote kick myself where I’m like “LOOK AT ALL THE SMART SAYINGS OF THE SMART PEOPLE! LOOK AT THEM! LOOOOOOOOK.” And then I think, “Wow, really could have picked a better senior quote.” XD And yesssss! Now we can officially share the nerdy things.
XD I can’t take credit for that idea. My lit teacher gave everyone…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@wordfitlyspoken We should start a club. xD “The Writers Who (Quietly) Don’t Drink Coffee” Also, no, I don’t mind at all! I totally just followed you on pinterest by the way. 😀
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation),…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flourney: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation),…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Kate: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation), but…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@Kate: lol! Yes, you are definitely in good company. Awesome, thanks for the suggestion. That was one of the lines I was actually poking with like “why are you not doing the things I want you to do, hmm?” I also don’t drink coffee (well, I kind of don’t– like, only when someone’s like “let’s go get coffee” and it’s a social obligation), but…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin started the topic These Critiques; I like them. Another! *slams down proverbial coffee cup* in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Hi all!
Here’s another poem that I wrote a little while ago. I’d love to hear what y’all think! Specifically on line breaks (again– see a pattern) as well as if there are any lines that seem irrelevant or out of place. Thanks! Y’all rock.
Authors are those
who have traveled into so many souls
that when they reach out
they brush against…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic It's Just a Little Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Haha! I feel that. Sometimes, too, I want to write a poem, but I sit down and I’m like “Nope, not happening” even though there’s a rant eeking to get out of me. xD
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
Looks good, Daues! Can’t wait to read the finished product.
Something I do see off hand is there is a ” missing from the like He lives,” sing the leaves.
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
“as the stars begin their sweet lullaby”
(Maybe one more line?)
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
as the stars begin their sweet lullaby.
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Help with titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
Hi there, Ivy! Thanks for asking this question. 🙂 I like the second group of titles the best. I think that they’ll be easier to remember, for one thing, and they sound a little cooler and mysterious than your first group. I’m also always a fan of one word titles 😉 but that’s just personal preference. I don’t think it’s a bad thing that your…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Help with titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
Hi there, Ivy! Thanks for asking this question. 🙂 I like the second group of titles the best. I think that they’ll be easier to remember, for one thing, and they sound a little cooler and mysterious than your first group. I’m also always a fan of one word titles 😉 but that’s just personal preference. I don’t think it’s a bad thing that your…[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic It's Just a Little Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Hi, Kate! I love this poem! It was very raw and descriptive, which I love! Keep it up! I agree with @Daeus; most of my “best” poems happen in the spur of the moment. 😀
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
“He lives,” sing the leaves.
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
“Speak of Love much greater than me”
Might’ve been better as two lines, but oh well. xD
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
“Speak of Love much greater than me”
Might’ve been better as one life, but oh well. xD
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic Let's Write A Poem in the forum Poetry 9 years, 1 month ago
“Then, I feel at home.”
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