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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
ALSO….
so….
Both Ridley AND Zlatan (her uncle) AND Corvina have black hair…..
SPOILER AS TO THE CULPRIT IN BOOK 2 AKA IN THE ANTAGONIST OTHER THEN CORVINA AND THE UNCLE
So yes. Ridley is the “murderer.” But so far how I have it, is that in the end it turned to be self defense. It was not pre meditated at all, a…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia
Everyone is now extremely tense. I fold my hands once more and sigh.
Well…we have now made it near the end of our story…well…backstory anyway.
And now…we can return to Cirque’s history. Where everything fell apart…
Once upon a night…there were two brothers.
They led their newl…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
PART 2 of LYN’s PART!
@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia @koshka @elishavet-pidyon Ik I’m splitting it into a lot of parts but bear with me. Gotta keep the suspense and intrigue up and I told ya, her stories kinda intense. Specially cuz she doesn’t find out bout it….until Um…stuff happens 😂
SPOILER ALERT FOR BOOK 2. This is actual…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
So the sigh was cuz I book 2 Ridley’s like her boyfriend-not-boyfriend 😂 like their together but not if that makes sense 😂 like they both mutually like each other
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyob @queen_of_alvastia
You have made it this far!! But be warned…there is more treachery to come!!
But now, I must tell you…things will get a bit bumpy…
I’m afraid I MUST interrupt this history lesson…and before I can tell you what takes place next, I must jump into the future, to Lyn and what takes pla…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen_of_alvastia
MWAHAHAHA XD
Once upon a night, two brothers lived in harmony.
The eldest; kind, with a sense of humor, and fond of all that lived, and the youngest, a ball of life, making the world his stage; wanting for attention.
Until attention was all he wanted.
Early in his life,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
You enter, finding yourselves in dark, velvet room. I sit before you in a dark chair, hands folded, smirking.Ahh…so you wish to hear the story of Lyn?
The story of Cirque?
well then, come on in.
But be warned!! This story is a bit…mad indeed.
But if you’re sure….then all I can say…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic SNEAK PEAK!?!?!? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Poor soul 😢
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka YALL ITS ALL WONDERFUL!!! POOR BUCKY!!! AND MIKKEL!! SOB!!! 😭
@elishavet-pidyon love it!!! And thank u!! Glad y’all like it!!
ALSO I WOULD LUV TO SHARE LYN’s BACKSTORY WITH YALL!! But it’s a bit complicated (A LOT COMPLICATED!!) sooo do y’all want me to?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic SNEAK PEAK!?!?!? in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
You….you don’t know batman….?
then….that means you don’t know JOKER….OR HARLEY….SCREECH
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Not rlly feeling an RP, sorry y’all….maybe later!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@elishavet-pidyon THANK U!! And yes she does!! I’m glad u like that little fact! I wanted her to call them something other then Mom or Daddy, and I just imagine her being so sweet and everything, it’s just fitting. Also with how they believe and serve God, it fits.
She calls her mom Ama (Ik in Hebrew it’s Ima but I like Ama and that is a way i…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
I am not retyping all of that…sigh…ur gonna have to get the condensed version….tho it’s not near as dramatic or heart wrenching…
Long story short-
Grimm loses his baby sister Mirella. She’s killed in a field of flowers as a child, because she was mute and deaf (thus the new Alpha Queen who had set up a horrid, twisted system, deems her a…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
YALL I HAD GRIMM’s WHOLE BACKSTORY ALMOST COMPLETELY WRITTEN UP AND LOST IT
I AM LITERALLY SO MAD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Y’all are probs gonna add Grimm into it too when I put in his backstory Lol
all my charries have backstories (even Lyn tho she doesn’t really realize it…MWAHAHAHA XD)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 it’s really awesome! UGH POOR JAREEEED!!! HE IS IN THE #PROTECTIONSQUAD!!!!!! *guards with arms crossed.*
Jared, meet November and Paxton and all the others in the squad.
I just realized I’m pretty sure it’s all guys….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia AH! Thank y’all!
so I’m glad u brought the brother thing up because…he is actually not….but I am sooo glad he SEEMS like he is!!!
so in this same scene I’m hoping to establish that he Isn’t Ara’s brother so there’s no confusion, but that he’s like her brother.
so it’s gonna come out maybe in thi…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Beat: Catalyst
Arabella
“Ganesh?”
The frantic speeches came to a halt as all eyes turned to her. Ara blushed, looking down at her reflection in the marble tiling. Heat rose to her neck and cheeks as she shrugged a strand of hair over her shoulder. This didn’t quell the feeling of eyes on her, though.
Burning into her skin. Into her soul. Not…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
OH ALSO FUNNY STORY TO ME BUT PROBABLY NO ONE ELSE XD
I was writing Scene Notes on notecards and spelt a side characters name wrong PURPOSELY. I LEGITIMATELY THOUGH THAT WAS HIS NAME and then later I went to say it out loud and was like….
“Wait…that’s not right.” And I said it again and was like “OH MY WORD. ARE YOU KIDDING ME? HOW DID…[Read more]
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