@godlyfantasy12
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Because…
It’s a story the Maker has always told
And the story, my child, is true.
(Armulyn, Royal Bard of the Shining Isle From chapter 96, “The Former Fangs Have Passed Away.”)
*Weeps*
That’s why I love this character.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
HI!! *Returns hugs and hands you a chocolate eclair* Aww, thank you, I’ll tell them!
Oh Zlatan, you golden heart. Each of those lashes paid for a child you set free. You knew the price for what you did, but didn’t know it was already paid for you.
Uh, anyway…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Favorite Scenes In Our WIPs! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Poor November!!
I think the scene is dramatic and highly interesting. Obviously, there is a lot going on in the background. I think the dialogue is very good, and definitely has my curiosity triggered.
(Random, but if you ever want good examples of verbal abuse in books, I don’t know if you’ve read it or would be interested, but…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok! XD yeah, I almost went back and added more, but I didn’t want to clog the gears.
Ahem.
Ocran
There she was. The impertinent young girl with her nasty creature.
The girl, Jocelyn or whatever it was, smiled up at him, her teeth glowing bright in the light of the torches.
What was she getting at? She aught to be on her knees…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Ara rose and dusted off her skirt. She seemed to have recovered. “We don’t want to be any trouble.”
Zlatan sighed. “If zees Corvina is bad enough her presence brings dreams in daylight (he is actually referring to PTSD), it looks like she’s already trouble.”
His brother laughed from where he leaned against…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Aw, good! Because, just warning: more are definitely coming. XD
(Yes! Actually The Shepherd/Lord is what they call Jesus, but the kings and princes of Eirtan are also called Shepherds. [and I’ll let you guess about the other titles he refers to 😉 ])
Sounds good to me!
Ocran
He was getting close. More than once he had caught…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I’m fine with that! I’m working on the next scene at the moment, sorry about the delay. Life goes on.
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Sofia
The courtyard occupants did not answer her, so she walked away from the window, wandering and wondering what to do.
The castle walls irked her, setting her on edge. She felt at home among the trees of a forest or standing on a ship at sea. But in buildings, her spirit crawled inside her, fighting to be free of the wood or stone…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe
“Guess I’ll let you tag along.”
Zoe hesitated. Should she really do this? If Corvina turned out to be against Malcolm, he might kill one of the twins. He would never kill me; he would never kill is favorite pet.
Corvina looked back at her. “You coming?”
Corvina was either working with Malcolm, or not, and Zoe hoped that…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
…and I’m back!
Ocran
The castle corridors wound on and on, and the light from the windows was mostly moonlight now. He had changed his torch thrice since the hunt began.
He would catch her, and when she did she’d pay for it. She showed too much if that easy bravery, that unquenchable friendliness that more than bordered on…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe
“Or…?”
Zoe didn’t continue. She didn’t have to. If the girl had ordered her, and not just asked, then she would have continued. But it wasn’t an order.
“Tell ya what,” Corvina started, “maybe you can help me. But this,” she waved her finger between Zoe and herself, “Isn’t gonna work. I’m not working with someone who w…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe
“Sorry sweetheart, dunno who this Malcom character is.” The girl looked around at the room, probably studying it; Zoe watched her, trying to understand what was happening. Why couldn’t things be easy and simple, like an order to “go here” or “do that”? Would this stranger be like Malcolm, and brutal?
“Does this, Malcolm,”…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Ooh, those are so good!!! I need you to make some memes for my charries. xD
Is November literally his name?
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Yes!! This is fun. I’ll have to take a pause in after this to get ready for church tonight, but maybe I can hop back on later.
Ocran
Aha! Someone was holding a one-sided conversation down the left hall. Definitely that Jocelyn girl.
He sped up the hall, passing darkening windows on his left.
He’d catch her soon. He always…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Whoo hoo! Nyx is so good. XD
Ocran
The girl smiled at his rebuke.
“Now darling, don’t worry,” she said to the little beast, or she had better be talking to it, because darling would be the crowning insult of her many rude comments. “I’m sure he didn’t mean.”
The creature was nothing abated. It continued to hiss and spit, s…[Read more]
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Annabelle replied to the topic Memes, Inspo, Aesthetics, Pretty Much Anything XD in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
SHOW ME YOUR MEMES. I WANNA SEE THEM SO BADDDD
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Hahahahaha! Sorry, I was working on my math and trying not to pay attention to my phone.
Ocran
The girl waved her hand as if she were talking to a fellow child. Extremely impertinent. Ocran glowered, but she remained undeterred.
“Hiya! Name’s Jocelyn, and this here’s my darling Nyx!” The Nyx creature bounded to it’s feet when…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe
“Well, this is unexpected.”
Zoe stopped, if that was a possible thing to do since she was already standing still. She stopped breathing.
The voice came from behind her, a girl’s voice. Unfamiliar. But confident. [Malcolm] must have sent her. No one walked the halls of [Malcolm]’s castle without a purpose. Zoe felt it was s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 It’s cool how your villain character can turn into a raven!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Aww, that’s cute!
@Everyone else I’m going to introduce my characters now.
Rinzler–My brother actually created this character. He’s eighteen, very cocky, and he has tousled black hair and brown eyes. He looks something like this, although this isn’t actually a drawing of him. He wears a suit of this type, though.

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