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EmilySF started the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
SO, I have two side character (or three) that I need to develop a bit more.
(This is for the story I was asking about the death of a character, if anyone remembers that… the WIP acronymed FP,WS.)
So, the MC has two students he’s teaching.
The theme is about changing the world and how you change the world in a meaningful way.
I already know…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
I’m sorry this has been so late, but I’ve been preparing for a Bible Quiz Tournament tomorrow, which actually means I probably won’t be back on here much till after the weekend.
Zlatan
Guards.
The footsteps had grown loud enough for Zlatan to hear. Not to many of them. If they came through the door as would…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I’m subscribed to this topic, so I did get your post. I’ve copy and pasted it here. @godlyfantasy12 may have it too, since she was tagged.
Zoe/Snow
I’m sorry. Sorry. Sorry.
Her thoughts ran on repeat with the memory. The memories. She wanted to slip back to the innocence of Snow, the purity and simplicity of that…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zoe/Snow
I’m sorry. Sorry. Sorry.
Her thoughts ran on repeat with the memory. The memories. She wanted to slip back to the innocence of Snow, the purity and simplicity of that side, but the guilt and memories dragged her back and pinned her just like Malcolm’s two assistants always did.
She couldn’t escape, no matter how hard…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
I absolutely love horses! I volunteer at a stable one day a week, and it’s awesome! so many things to learn!
That is so fun!! My sister is getting a summer job with the stables across the street from my family.
yesssss, mornings are great! Most mornings at least. (do you dream much?)
Yeah, most mornings. 😉 I… don’t really. I do dream, but not s…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Alyona
There was still nearly a serving left in the pot. Alyona had taken her bowl to the pot to pretend to fill it, but to her shock, she found there was still stew.
How…?
Before too much suspicion could be raised, she scooped up a bit and topped off the bowl. Then she cut a goodly piece of bread and handed the meal…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Here goes!
Zlatan
He flinched at the force of the slap on his shoulder, then sighed. His brother was being his typical friendly self, reminding Zlatan that these were possible allies.
The lad looked to each of the group as they were introduced, then back at the brothers, dark eyes searching.
So this is who…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Alyona
This wasn’t going right. Hopefully it wouldn’t go wrong either.
They had been forced to follow Jocelyn inside, from one threat to another. If only she could know for certain if the two VoyageFolk were Smugglers or not, then she wouldn’t be so uncertain.
At least Viktor was safely with her, however safe that may…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Vulkasin and Zlatan
She had closed the door behind her, not exactly how someone would react to a guard. Unless she was trying to cover for them.
Why would she do that?Vulkasin frowned. He didn’t need anyone to cover for him.
November suddenly spoke. “You’re sure?” he appeared to have been addressing the fox…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
*Wriggle of excitement*
Viktor
There in the doorway stood a girl around his age, a wide smile illuminating her face.
Alyona had instinctively clutched at his hand when the door had opened, and he couldn’t help but notice how clammy her own hand was. What had frightened her this badly? The stranger seemed friendly…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That would probably be a good idea. I’m sorry, I’ll try to get back on later today!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Eeeeps! Sorry… I’ll try to get something up.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
……..and I’m back!!! (Sorry, my phone was hijacked by a sibling, which is fine ’cause I’ll probably do the same to hers some time. The problem with having books on one’s phone. XD)
Alyona
An eternity passed before someone spoke up. Well, maybe not quite an eternity, but to Alyona’s anxious mind, it was undeniably…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ooo, maybe they should meet each other. XD Of course, my charies have absolutely no idea what a shape shifter is, so that could be awkward.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Zlatan and Vulkasin
They were all looking at the brothers now, curiosity fully flamed.
Zlatan sighed. A memory of heat in the halls during the day brought a deep yearning for his snow crested home, although he was positive November had been shivering. The sharp smell of spruce and larch seemed just out of…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Alyona
November made a face and Arabella gave him a small smile.
‘What did I say?’
“Ah, I think we’ll take water,” Arabella said demurely. Alyona filled her pitcher and filled three cups, keeping her eyes properly downcast.
“Though…I suppose Zlatan and Vulkasin are old enough for wine…”
Old enough for wine? Al…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Novembré’s face twisted with disgust. Ara’s smile was small. ”
“Ah, I think we’ll take water, Though…I suppose Zlatan and Vulkasin are old enough for wine…”
Zlatan started, then looked to Vulkasin. Old enough? He knew of two year olds who drank their wine and water. He had been one. (Water…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yes, that is okay, thank you!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @emilysf @koshka
Okay! 😉 We’ll see what we can do…
Alyona
The stew was quickly divided up among the group. Thankfully, there seemed to be enough for everyone.
Which meant there would be none to fill a bottle for the journey.
Oh well, bread kept better anyway.
She settled in on a stool beside the fireplace, just where a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Whatever you want to do, I don’t mind. She’s been fun!
To explain what may sound a bit strange; the twins’ fights as kids usually ended a headlock, mostly on Zlatan. So anything close to one he will vaguely view a poetic justice. XD
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