GodlyFantasy12

@godlyfantasy12 Ah, unfortunately I don’t have Facebook. Best of luck, though!

@godlyfantasy12,

Sorry, I don’t have a Facebook account. 🙁 But thx for tagging me! You tagged most of the peeps I know of on here, lemme add one or two… @beth-darlene @erynne

@godlyfantasy12

Oooo that sounds SO awesome, thanks for tagging me!!!!! Unfortunately, I don’t do social media. 🙁 Sorry.

@godlyfantasy12

I know I’m late, I’m so sorry! Life became a whirlwind of activity, and I haven’t been able to get on here until now.

One way you can have the girls meet Lyn is to have them wake up to her examining them. From there, they can panic, thinking she’s going to hurt them, and you can have a lovely scene of confusion. 😉 Or they could…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Thank you so much for this lesson!!!!! 🙂 I really enjoyed reading through these and the Bible verses!!!!! Thank you so much for doing these devotions!!!!! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12 Will you tag me when you do post the study? I really love reading through them!!!! 🙂

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia @godlyfantasy12 @nova21 @joy-caroline @gracie-j

Anyone on to chat? I’m just doing random author things. 🙂

@gracie-j

So much yes on character who don’t feel like they were solely made for the plot! Those are my favorite kind characters whether they are a villains or any other type of character.

(Oh, and your not the only one who had their day made by the Shrek joke by @not-so-secret-secret-assassin haha. XD)

@devastate-lasting

People don’t talk…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

It seems like the forum is eating my reply… If you didn’t get my post, let me know and I’ll re-post it. 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

Girl, I totally understand feeling stuck about this, and might I say, @gracie-j, I’m honored that you tagged me! 🙂 Okay, so first of all, this elements sound very hooking and I know it can be a struggle with introducing new worlds/characters in a flash. Seriously, my novel is chock-full of this.

*rubs hands together* First t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Sounds like Lyn really wants to be their friend. If I were her then I would want to tell them a bit about myself and maybe show them around if they have any questions. Probably the smoothest way to info-dump.

@godlyfantasy12

i would say first of all

i LOVE this kind of fantasy!! EEE

also, I would use observation of the people around them

like, to a certain extent observing differences.

also, them being overwhelmed and totally (not) FREAKING OUT would not be unrealistic. I mean, I just did the same to my MC. Well, she was unconscious and it was a…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, I totally feel this struggle. It does get more difficult to handle characters transitioning to a new world when there is more than one of them, as well. It isn’t impossible, it just gets more challenging.

It sounds like the characters are waking up to a day where there may not be much else to do aside from introduce them t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Wow! I loved this poem, you did such a great job with it. I was also surprised to hear that you don’t write poetry–this is really good!

Now, this is coming from an amateur in poetry, so disregard my comments if they don’t apply:

I noticed that there is no exclamation point in the second “Evil queen! Evil queen!” section here (I…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

You did an ASTOUNDING job with this poem, girl! Every line flowed so smoothly, the rhythm was very well-written, the parallels at the end were just, *chef’s kiss* brilliant, and overall I think you did a fantastic job! I have to say that the ending is my favorite part, and the shift in tenses wasn’t problematic at all. Great job!…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Of course! I’m glad I was able to help. You honestly don’t write poetry? I thought that that was excellent 😀 It was so much fun to read and interesting and yes, I just loved it!

YES!! That is amazing! Much better on the length and it fades the poem out more naturally, I think that’s sensational:)

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, KP sometimes takes the line breakers out of posts and the paragraphs get joined, (it’s happened to me several times, but I’m not sure what causes it).

Number one, -I consider this the most important part of my thoughts on this- I loved your poem! Especially where the narrator refuses to put the mirror away and…[Read more]

Oh, and I hope you don’t mind me tagging you, but here goes…

@gracie-j, @issawriter7, @mkfairygirl, @kathleenramm, @lydia-s, @godlyfantasy12, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @abigail-m, @joy-caroline, @seekjustice, @jodi-maile, @joelle-stone, @anyone + everyone, @all those I forgot to mention.