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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I have time!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@denali-christianson @godlyfantasy12
Definitely. I’m still waiting to see how the courtyard sense continues.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Yay! Its Nyx and Lyn! I was hoping. =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Vulkasin and Zlatan
Ara was hiding a smile. Vulkasin supposed Zlatan could have chosen a better name, but then, there were worse.
“I’m afraid not…Though, I’m guessing from the way you describe him, you aren’t on good terms?” She glanced at Novembré who seemed a bit red about the ears. Vulkasin grinned, then wiped it off under hi…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Lydia S. replied to the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page….Woohoo in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
OoooOoOoOoOooo… Yeah, I’ve been there… Trying to make the choice of whether or not to let a beloved character go (whether by death or by joining the “bad guys”) is SO HARD.
I guess, for me, it came down to reality, predictability, and cliche-ness (pretty sure that’s not a word, but, oh well!😂). The character I had this proble…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan and Vulkasin
Vulkasin wasn’t alone. Zlatan’s golden eyes narrowed as he studied the girl a moment. Brown hair and eyes, worried face. She stared at him as if he would eat her.
Novembré stepped out behind him. “So, you’ll help me then?”
The girls face flashed with light at her sudden smile. “November!”
The lad’s face…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Sure! That’s fine with me.
By the way, I’m also considering adding in another character, considering the lack of girls. It’d either be one of Viktor’s sisters (Alyona) or an MC from the other series I’m plotting (Winifrith).
But I might not, we’ll just see.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
And November and Ara are awesome! I keep laughing with every new VP of his.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! I will admit I may have used my two best MCs, but their also my favorite, so…and Vulkasin really does need development.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I like long ones! =)
Zlatan
In an instant November had changed from a fumbling bundle of nerves to a lad staring at Zlatan with a look ready to tear down walls. “Have you seen Arabella? She’s my…She’s my friend.”
Zlatan’s smile returned. The lad could be a fighter after all. “Neh, I ‘ave not seen any living soul ‘ere beside y…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Zlatan
The lad was obviously in an emotional breakdown. He was pulling his hair and jabbering.
“Point is, I..ah, really didn’t mean to do any of this! It just kinda…happens.” the lad grimaced. “So…if you could…not mention this? Or…umm…not lock me away for all eternity?” He smiled but his eyes were still terrified.
Zlata…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page….Woohoo in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
This might not be the best advice by a long shot, but you seem like you’re REALLY in love with the idea of bringing them back. Like I can just feel how much you love this idea and your excitement to write it. And I guess for me, that’s the best reason to follow through with the idea! It’s your story at the end of the day, and if…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
He thinks he’s 13, having but one year before the monumental year of 14, in which he is considered an adult, (although, yes people understand he’s a young adult, and treat him likewise.)
He’s actually 14, but that will only be important later in the book, so yeah, he’d say 13.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
That’s fine with me! Also, it may be good to keep them human here, as some things about wolf nature really only work in the right story…such as sudden madness at the taste or smell of blood. *Shrug* So what if I may be ignoring thumbs in my books?
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Denali Christianson replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
OH COOL!! I’ll just have them have to find each other!! HAHAHA I AL DIABOLICAL!!!
HAHAHAHAHA SAMMMMEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (you should hear me rant about my villains XD)
she’s sweet and sensitive and gentle, but her flaw is actually shoving down her personality due to a mistake she made as a child (which left her with the scar) so she…
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you! November and Ara are fantastic too. Oh, November…. XD I love reading what you write of him.
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Beloved Character Death Discussion Page….Woohoo in the forum Characters 4 years, 4 months ago
Yay! I’m glad it was somewhat helpful, infact, I think it helped me!
Yeah, that sounds awesome! If it’s what you think your story (or charrie) needs, then definitely go for it.
And I will admit, I love it when a character lives. I mean, yes, it’s extremely powerful when they don’t as well, but why else would I want to show…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
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