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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Alyona
It was over. She had located Viktor as soon as the fists had stopped flying. He was sitting against the wall, his head leaned back, watching Franz with a much more peaceful expression.
Then he had come forward and now he was checking after Riker and the others.
Alyona followed Arabella…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Riker was kneeling beside his father, white faced. His eyes. So like…
He should never have let this happen. Should never have let his instincts take over.
Never lost control.
Zlatan closed his eyes.
Zlatan, hey, stay here. Don’t get lost in your head.
Blink. Was that h…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
The man looked bad, but the only blood was bright, none of the dark kind Mikkel knew to look for.
He stepped away from Eva, his hands already digging out his kit.
“Riker, please lay him flat on his back.” He knelt beside him. “Does anyone have water? I’m almost out.”
The…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Ah, yes. This is perfect! (In a horrible way.)
Viktor
The man was on the ground, the fight was over. Viktor’s shoulder ached from where he’d collided with Zlatan.
From Zlatan’s face, Viktor guessed the Voyager didn’t mind that Viktor had pushed him away from his purpose.
Or rather, back onto…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
For a moment silence reigned.
Mikkel blinked.
“Poor fellow. Pity he underestimated his enemy.”
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Wow. These characters… Wow.
*Pulls Zlatan into the group hug*
*Doesn’t think Nyx would want to be huged by a stranger*
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
White hot fury.
Freezing passion.
Smell of blood.
The world went red.
.
.
He blinked. Franz was on the floor before him.
“I’m sorry.”
He was breathing, a large knot forming over his temple. Thank the Maker, he wasn’t killed.
Riker looker up his eyes wide.
“I’m sorry.”
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Ooooooooooooooo! Pizza!
Riker, November… Words fail.
Alyona
Something had changed. This was bad.
Alyona strained to see her brother’s face. When she did, the breath left her lungs.
Lit with a strange fury, his face shone white, but the anger met grief in his eyes. Dangerous grief.
He…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
That’s fine! (I kinda take long anyways, sooo.) November is wonderful!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
It’s fine! I like long ones, although I usually can’t write them.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
All our dearest characters are our hurt ones!!!
Oh, if Alwin we’re here right now….
Viktor
The man… Hit… Riker.
Viktor’s mind froze on the image, unreal in the torch light. His ears filled with the sound of the blow.
And Alya’s scream.
Then two things fell into place.
This was a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
If anyone else gets something in before me, ignore this please.
Zlatan
The man struck Riker.
Just like that.
This was not how a father should act.
This was like someone else Zlatan knew all to well.
He never felt himself moving. One moment he was standing behind Rikker. The next…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Oh boy.
Viktor
It was not a gaurd, thank the Lord, and it wasn’t one of the retainers Viktor had seen during the day. This man was a stranger to him.
But not to others.
“Father, please calm down.” there was almost a quaver in Riker’s voice. The man had placed himself in front of November and…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
This man was mad. Or from some strange South Kingdom. There was no other explanation for such a display of anger.
Or perhaps he had been drinking something far stronger than water.
Father.
Riker had called him Father.
Zlatan sheathed his blade, freeing his hands if needed.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka
Which of you has Nyx? I was hearing about the characters separating and I honestly want to see Nyx stuck with Crosshair and suddenly talk to him (it probably won’t be something nice, but it’d be hilarious either way cause my charrie’s going to be like WHAT THE HECK YOU CAN TALK for a…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
They were once again inside – or if not, close enough. The walls hardly let any starlight down here.
Someone else was near by. Friend? Foe? Viktor didn’t know and couldn’t guess.
He loosened his sword, the gastly thing, in it’s sheath, ready to draw. If only he knew how to use it. If…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
Someone was coming. Mikkel switched off the safety, his mind switching with it.
A sword drew beside him, another in behind, one pistol was out.
Rikker hadn’t drawn his weapon, though his fingers wrapped around it, knuckles white.
Strange.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Yes!! Nyx and Zlatan. Lol!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Exactly!!! XD
Viktor and November should totally get together. It would take a bit to make Viktor comfortable enough to tease November. Which would also be great. They really have a lot in common. Viktor hates fights, but he’d punch someone without thinking of it was to protect someone he loves.
Ah, Nyx. Yes. He must learn to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
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