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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Sure! Or at least I’ll try to be fast. I’m not quick with words.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Very nearly literally. But don’t worry too much! He survives.
I don’t think I could kill him. (Hear that Zlati? Your author loves you!!!)
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Do you want the long and detailed version, or the short and boring one?
Short version: a child indirectly woke up his conscience, then he basically gave his life to save a bunch of kids from the prison camps where he’s a guard.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Another corridor opened in front of them. Good. They were well out of the tower by now.
Not that those guards behind them couldn’t follow…
Nyx’s voice broke in on his mental calculations. In his head. Is there no peace even in my mind? He sighed and resigned himself to the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I love Nyx’s art! And Grimm’s expression is just great….
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Also I don’t mind Nyx calling Crosshair a snake. He actually kinda does remind me of that. HE might not like it. But I’m the author, not him, so he’s gonna have to deal with it.
Crosshair
“No, can’t say I have….but to be honest, I didn’t have a lot of friends. Never fit in.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
I sort of am? But I won’t be for too long.
I’m also trying to minimize my time spent on media, so if I’m a bit unsteady on here, that’s why.
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Koshka replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
AAGHHH!!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO!!!
Don’t do this-please don’t do this!!! I need these charies as they are in the book! Not…
Evil maniacs.
This is crazy. I mean, good character development, or course. 😉
Come to think of it though…no matter the situation, any character can become the villain of their own story. What true…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka
I’m thinking that after November wakes up, or around that time, I’ll bring in my crazy side character. He would probably not stay with the group, but rather get them moving along and provide amble opportunity for conversation/fluff. He’s a hilarious old meddler.
As for the questions, first off, Ocran…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
First off, I am furious about your WIP. I love those characters too much to see them turn villains!!!
Secondly, that’s awesome. I love the character development. It’s so brilliant!
Just don’t be mad if I kidnap your characters out of your AU. 😉
(Just kidding, of course. It really is awesome.)
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@joy-caroline @freedomwriter76 (RIKER!!!) @godlyfantasy12 (Thank you! It means a lot to know you find it so. 🙂 ) @koshka
So, I promised a while back that I’d share this scene, but I had a lot left undone in it at the time. Now, while it’s still extremely rough and subject to change depending on how the story falls out, it is complete.
So, here…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Oooh, interesting!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Rinzler
Children?? Who did this Franz dude think he was?!
Rinzler was nineteen, thank you very much! Almost twenty!
The other guy with the weird name–Vulkasin, whatever sort of name that was–also looked annoyed.
Good, at least there was someone who agreed with him.
At least…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ahhh, I love all the scenes you shared!
(Even though I am a touch mad at the cliffhanger. 😉 )
November is so sweet and perfectly awkward. I sympathize very much. XD and Ara…. Oh Ara.
And yes, Riven is dooming himself to major rewards…. But definitely not the nice kind!
And I think Ganesh us becoming a favorite character…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Vulkasin folded his arms and stared at the man, standing in his full hight.
Children? Did that man insinuate that he was a child, without an ability to contribute to the Pack? Not even a youth, a person of seven years or more, thus belonging to the tribe although not full gr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Hopefully they do…still not sure how it ends though, so-
*Gasp*
NOT ARA THE VILLIAN?!
The world is no longer safe. XD
I know…(feeling mildly sorry for them but also too satisfied to save them)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Feather
A young woman, about Feather’s own age, was standing there, watching them as they leaped off the wall.
“More people?” Rinzler eyed her.
“Don’t be rude.” Feather chided him. She walked up to the newcomer. “Hi there! My name’s Feather, and my friend is Rinzler. What’s your…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Vesper
So one was a Hydra agent, whatever that meant, one was a loud oaf, and one was a mystery. That cleared things up a lot.
“Hello there, little girl.” The one called Viola waved. Vesper turned and followed Viola’s gaze to a small girl with hair so bright it almost shone with a light of its own. She looke…[Read more]
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ET replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Vesper
The black-haired one and the man did not look too friendly.
“Hello there. Who are you?” The other woman asked.
A failure. A disappointment. “Vesper of the Silver River, Crown Prince of Ulmire, Knight of Eudor, and Paladin of the Golden Blade.” Oof. That was a mouthful. “It was I who slew the Great Ser…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic WIP AUs in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Oh course we want to read yours!!! I was hoping you’d put them on here.
Here we go…
Chapter One
“David.”
Scritch, scritch. Daithí’s pencil kept moving across his page, copying out the report with perfect flaws.
“David Loranson.”
The lad beside him shifted uncomfortably, his creaky bench the only sound in the now silent…[Read more]
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