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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Oops sorry… I was referring to the twins’ eye colors. Vulkasin’s flower petal yellow, Zlatan warm gold.
I know! This time I just hit the wrong button. *Sigh*
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Ok, let’s go!
Viktor
Tall walls loomed above them, trapping them into a place that smelled too much like horses and people. Viktor scrunched his nose and cut a glance at the boy beside him.
Reúven relaxed against the wall, his arms crossed in a manner that was both comfortable, and that allowed him to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
(Ugh, I accidentally deleted my response.)
Yes, I remember! She’s another of those people on my To Be Despised list.
The Twins
Faint flickers of light whispered of torches. The stairs grew steeper untill they suddenly stopped. But not before a sound from below froze the two a few steps from the bottom.
Bright yellow eyes met…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yes, That’s perfectly fine! In all honesty it’ll probably help.
I think their a little disoriented right now, and Vulkasin’s like “Hey, where do you think this goes?”
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Well, it’s a bit complicated. Basically he refused to complete some pretty horrible orders, and by the time he got caught he had started undoing much of his commanding officer’s work.
As to who had it done, GO BEAT HIM UP FOR ME IF YOU PLEASE. His name is Yarvoj. He was Zlatan’s Sotnik.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Of course Paxton can wear that! He’d be really cute…
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
So, a quick run down of what’s changed:
This is right after Zlatan’s Solution beat, so he’s a bit emaciated and weak, and has wounds from his beating which are still healing. He’s wearing no armor besides his sword, in an effort to reduce the pain. He’s struggling a bit with redemption right…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ach, I know! But I’m really glad it makes you feel that way.
You do. 😉
Haha! Seriously though, I like the earlier medieval fashions for a reason! XD
William’s “hose” is the same thing.
Awwwwwww, I can totally imagine him like that and it’s soooo cute!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
And lastly, (for now)
William. Brown blonde hair and green eyes, he is tall and broad shouldered. And serious, very serious. Although, among friends he will open up more and maybe even laugh. It’s not that he’s stoic per se, just that he’s… William. Very loyal and protective of those he loves, it’s b…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Yay! She might show up… I’m still not quite sure,since it really does change so e stuff with my timeline, but that the same time, I’m like: “ditch the timeline!” XD
As for my charries getting people… I literally have no idea. Just probably not my other characters. I really don’t know, though, so…
If I added Winifrith, I’d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Sounds good! I’ll do a quick RP for the twins, then you can hear them or something? Whatever you want to do. I’m game. =)
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Next! (And sorry, I didn’t tag in the last two.)
Yes! Viktor is staying, and I also want to add…
Alwin. Has black hair that is cut fairly short, a rough ivory complexion, and thoughtful dark blue eyes. He is somewhat tall, but thin from lack of nourishment as much as from genetics.
Quiet but driven, h…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
IS he is the protection agency? I’m not even an official member, but if it comes to it I’ll capture him myself!
*Drops visor on helmet*
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Okay, so I’ll try to introduce Reúven (Fritz) first…
Reúven. A laugh dances in his hazel eyes, but the set of his chin is determined. He has the soft calloused hands of a shepherd and the fleet feet of one. Which is a blessing, because he has given those feet to his lame father. What started in fe…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
LUNA!!! Ugh, I love her.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Ahhhhh, I love them all. (But Paxton just about tore me up, the poor wee darling. Do you need someone to find him?) And LUNA!!!!!!!!
Yeah, she’s made her own special place in my heart. XD
And she’s really making me want to add in Winnifrith.
So, I think Alyona is not here this time, and Viktor and Reúven are on one of their…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Sorry, I just spent two hours on a research rabbit trail.
BUT, I’ve been thinking. I’m struggling a bit with Vulkasin’s arc, so I’m thinking of proofing the twins six months back, to the solution conflicts of their plots. They’d still have been here and remember all that, I’d just rewind t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Grimm and Nyx are hilarious!!! I want to see those two!
Or rather I just want more of all your characters. Like, ugh, they’re wonderful!
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