GodlyFantasy12

@rae

Hugo

“Oof.” Hugo wrinkled his nose again, and scowled. “I don’t do strict.”

Nar sighed dramatically. “Well… if that’s how it is…”

“Okay, I’m just kidding.” Hugo couldn’t play the serious part for more than a minute before breaking out in a smile, made of dazzling sunshine. It was just impossible. “All those traditions and rituals sound s…[Read more]

@loopylin

No no no –

You don’t understand. They are officially my character, by order of KP signature. See signature, please.

@trailblazer Aww!!! 🥰 Yeah, I’m team Albert and Libbie.

@freedomwriter76

I love how you draw eyes! I can’t really pull off anime eyes for some reason… XD

@loopylin

AaaAAaaHhhh my children

MY children

@loopylin

Those two children of yours are the cutest, I just wanna give Lois a hug…

@rae

Hugo

“Heeey, I’ve got it! Okay – watch this -”

Hugo tried again, this time by himself. He made it almost to the end, but slipped up, and finished with a goofy swing freestyle. His feet tapped rhythmically as he tilted his head to one side, grinnin…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh wow, you parents being grandparents is weird O_O

Nicknames is great, I need to listen to it again, so glad you like it! Oh, I like run the world too.

I’ll have to check that one out, I haven’t listened to much TOP other than their really big hits.

Yeah! Totally recommend it, along with a big dose of caution. BTS is a pretty safe…[Read more]

@rae

Hugo

Nar had all the elegance of a nightclub performer back home.

When she finished, Hugo clapped his hands together. “Flexible and agile are my two middle names, sister. Okay, you start like this, right?…”

He wasn’t a perfect learner. Only one step at an time. Unlike his rascal brother, who could picture a hundred moves ahead in his min…[Read more]

@rae

Your smile is one.

*squeaks uncharacteristically*

Hugo

“If you aren’t horribly offended, I’ll just call you Miss Nar, please.”

He had never met someone truly familiar with an emperor-run system before. However, an emperor was more or less a dictator, which wasn’t too far from his own world. He hoped her world wasn’t consumed by organized m…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I know, I know XD I want to write, and I have an idea for a scene I want to write today for Leon/Riker’s 3rd book🤫

Oh, really?! Cool! Tag me if you post it pls! Also, I haven’t been getting notifs for some of your posts, so if I don’t respond that might be it. 🙁

Thanks! XD

Oh, yes, draw bucky! I’m currently working on a Mav…[Read more]

@rae

Hugo

Hugo half-hissed, half-laughed, “I’m sure whatever you just said was a good thing, Miss Nar.”

He had practically forgotten his manners in this modern world. For the first time that night, two spots of red glowed on his cheeks.

@savannah_grace2009

That sounds good, I’m glad you were able to get a clear answer from God! I agree, I think it still definitely works even without the shorter beginning. And even if it does turn some readers away, it’s going to touch the people God wants it to. 🙂

@savannah_grace2009

About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂

You do whatever you want, girl, it’s your story. XD

I had actually never heard that before, but it kind of makes sense. I think some writers also use prologues for info-dumping. I’d rather have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

💖💖💖

@savannah_grace2009

Ok so in this RP I say Liv has blue eyes, but correct me if I’m wrong. 😂

Lukas

Lukas found he couldn’t take his eyes off Liv’s face. He tried, but somehow, he found himself drowning in the crystalline pool of her blue eyes.

“Aww.” He heard a whisper pass by him. He blinked and looked behind him, only to see Fynn dance awa…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

First of all, I love your writing!!

Second, my actual answer to your question. XD Ok. So I think I prefer the first one better. Though I do have an opinion on prologues… I heard an author (who had been writing since forever) say that he doesn’t like prologues because typically writers use them as a way to draw readers in bef…[Read more]

@loopylin

You got thissssss XDXD I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.

@rae

…Everyone does stupid stuff XD BUT I would not call you stupid. You have an innocent track record on here, and that would be unnecessarily villainous of me.

It’s official, Nar has a crush on Hugo already.

OH MYYy that’s so sweet of her!

I just hope he…[Read more]

Me when I can barely walk at school, my classmates ask what’s wrong, and I have to tell them I stretched my muscles too much trying to learn the Charleston:

Babs

“Oh Baaaaaaabs…” The Vinlin’s warm, boyish face turned to her, streaked with dark curls. He tied his coat around his waist and held out his hands. “Come on!”

Babs fussed with her clothes and hair one moment too long, and he pulled her onto the dance floor.

With a squeak, she tried her very best – but what was she supposed to focus on? H…[Read more]