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@ellette-giselle

Good section! I like it.

It was a little unclear that the other three men were joining Leon and Julian until now, unless they were in the first scene and I’m completely blaming. I just don’t think we got to hear that they were back yet.

My guess is that since no one has seen the prince’s face, they will replace him with his c…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theducktator @linus-smallprint

Next two chapters!

@keilah

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@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @grcr

Thank you 🥰 I haven’t drawn many cartoon children before, and I should practice more.

That would be neat!

Maybe I’ll get around to making a topic for it, then!

Does his culture not cut a boy’s hair until he’s in knickers/four/weaned/school age?

Hm… *Does not want to say too much*
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@theshadow

No worries! That makes sense.

@keilah-h

Yep, 100%

Might be the wrong topic, but does anyone have any digital painting tips?

@keilah-h

Me, the perfectionist: o__o

We could make a topic for interesting photo references to draw. That could be really cool.

Also this was posted on the art challenge chat, but I just want to mention how cool it is to use a photo reference and play around with it.

It just makes me happy and I want to try again. 😁 But there’s no way I’m going to succeed a second time. That would be too consistent.

Back to memes

@keilah-h

I mostly have a soft spot for the first, but all three are good

A doodle I did not want to spend much time on, but enjoyed anyway. Maybe it’s baby Marcel

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good!

Oh, gotcha, thanks.

@ellette-giselle

I have hope that you won’t kill off all the characters… but am expecting at least one of the MCs to die. 😭😫

@ellette-giselle

Great first section! You did a good job of establishing the stakes and the characters’ situations. One thought I had (for you to consider) is possibly to remove the first journal entry and start off the book with Leon. It might be a stronger beginning… but it works great with the journal entry there too.

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@ellette-giselle

Oh, haha. XD. Yeah, I think we talked about it briefly right when you were first starting it.

Leon and Julian, from the last book. (Plus Albee and Ian, but I don’t think they’re coming back . . . unless they do. That would be cool.) I have a lot of other favorites, but they’re not in the Empire, so I doubt they’ll have much of a…[Read more]

@theshadow

The main character is incredibly bland, but also the most unique person in the universe. Typically I’ve noticed female protagonists are like this, and they’re usually super insecure about their looks but are actually pretty. Additionally, the protagonist has some special ability that makes them stand out and is caught up in a love tri…

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@ellette-giselle

6)Prepare for major fallout to begin from the Prince dying in the last book.
*nods happily*

2)Nearly everyone we love will get hurt.
why would you ever think that?! 😢

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Mostly this.