Glitter Ocelot

@josiahdeboer There is no shame in sharing. In fact you just led the way for others to shamelessly share.

@kate-flournoy @lifeofkatie @dragon-snapper @seekjustice Anybody else have a blog? 🙂

And anyone else who has a blog that we don’t know about, should say something here.

@daeus hmmmmmm…… I personally would stick to appealing by genre instead of life struggles…. because in the end the character normally is better (now I haven’t read it all yet sooooo….) but in real life when we finish the book were still the same and it can be kinda depressing. I don’t know if anyone else can relate to that…
I still don’t…[Read more]

@seekjustice do you know who the singer was??? Have fun on your trip *wipes tear* a writing buddy is leaving us guys, she’s leaving us!!!!

@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛

@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!

@daeus
Well, big thoughts is mainly that you should take out the last paragraph, because although you’re trying to appeal with struggles like that, people might not want to think of themselves as weak or cowardly, if you know what I mean. Maybe they know that subconsciously, but who wants to admit that they are a coward? I mean, a Christian might…[Read more]

@shannon http://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/a-child-victorious.html

@jess-penrose XD Yeah, that’s my thoughts. 😀 You might have noticed I have very strong opinions on these things. 😛

@rolena-hatfield I love your blog! Your Attic looks so nice!

@shannon I think you have… it’s called : A Child Victorious

Here’s a collage for the first short story I did.
@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon

@daeus Okay *looks over the top of my glasses* 😉

First I would re-word the first sentence, it doesn’t seem to flow and seems forced. It just doesn’t sound right. Kate’s example is much easier to read.
I also agree with Kate about the part about Jerold (which how dare you make a lesser character so intriguing. Really I wanna know more about him.…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy He forgot to tag me too. Can we take over the kingdom now? How bout now? Now?
@daeus Well…do you want my big thoughts or little thoughts?

@daeus I’ll try here I need to read over it with a piece of paper to make notes with so give me a few, but one thing I did notice….. 😛 😉

It is a book for the week

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@raevynstar I’m going to come right out and say it, I saw your profile pic and just about fell out of my chair. 😛 I LOVE TWENTY ONE PILOTS. *insert crazy fan moment here* Ok, now I’ve done that- hello!! Welcome to KP! How’d you hear about us?

*appears in a puff of smoke* Salutations, @kballen! *shakes your hand* Glad you could join us. So, what’s your favorite fictional animal?

@Shannon No, I went to the DMV or whatever it’s called and took it there so a bunch of total strangers could see how nervous I was. 😉 This is terrible, but I’m kind of glad I’m not the only one who failed the first time. Not that I’m happy you failed, but, well, you get my point?

@that_writer_girl_99 Sure! I will pray for you. 🙂

@amy-l-klob That’s my favorite time period right now, too! I also like any history that has to do with airplanes. I know the “excited puppy” feeling as well. 😀

@aratrea heheeee