Grace H.

@rochellaine

Yep. It was funny but I agree that it’s a little too mean (even given the sort of person my MC’s brother is) and my MC should be trying to come across as a proper lady at that moment so insulting a family member like that does not fit with the image.

@seekjustice @rochellaine

I’ll be here before work.

Rochellaine, thanks for your comments in my doc. I’ve replied so you can go take a look. I’ve decided to remove that part with my MC’s brother. The whole issue with that is that my MC and her brother are really, really not supposed to be looked up to by the readers anyway so I thought that that…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Haha does that mean I have a distinctive writing style? Or that my stories are too similar in inspiration and tone?

I think QOD and ROF will end being similar in tone but the stories will be very different. QOD features a female MC who loves romance and whose story is more of one of drama and personal growth. ROF will feature a male…[Read more]

@rochellaine  Hopefully inspiration will kick in soon…

Can you remind me one more time about all the positions on the Kingdom now? I know SeekJustice is the queen… Or something.

@rochellaine  (Sorry it took so long to respond. I’m a little distracted.)

Fair enough…

Do you think I should write another KPA? A shorter one? XD

@rochellaine

Oh. My other question had to do with the “When she did” line which you apparently have no idea how to rephrase too. 😛

For my MC’s age… I don’t think I am going to change it. But I think I would insert a line somewhere saying that the actual marriage is not going to take place until years later (sigh, catering to the delicate…[Read more]

@valtmy  I’m glad your writing is going well!! 😀 😀

(I’m not trying to imply that I’m glad you keep disappearing, by the way… XD)

@rochellaine  I’m pretty sure I’m on the second draft. Why?

Good! I’m glad! So now I know I DON’T want poison ivy. XD

A jackalope is like a giant rabbit with antlers. Look up pictures. 😉

@rochellaine

Haha. I have phases where I fall in love and out of love with my own projects. I’ve been rereading what I’ve written so far for my WIP to encourage myself to push forward. 😛

Oh by the way, there are some questions I asked you in response to your comments in my doc. Some of them are still bothering me especially the one with regard…[Read more]

@catwing  I like blog posts with art in them (like your comic) and life posts in general. Like the kind of stuff Ethryndal does (if you’ve ever read her blog).

@rochellaine  Hey hey! That’s fine. 😉 I’m at the part where Chessy is talking to Kai.

I’m very curious about this “boy…” *smirks* How’s your poison ivy doing, by the way? Any better?

Random-ish question: Would you disbelief a jackalope?

@catwing  Hullo! Good to see ya! How are you doing?

@rochellaine

OK I’ve put in my suggestions in the doc.

@valtmy  @catwing  @rochellaine  @seekjustice  @whoever

Oy! I’m beta-reading again!

@rochellaine

I didn’t say you didn’t give enough info. I understood the “going to be late” thing was something that the reader doesn’t need to know now. It’s just jarring that this guy doesn’t know who Bathshua is but this other guy with him somehow does so I think an explanation is needed for that.

Sure I’ll be happy to take a look at your…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Hey. Just trying to get the motivation to start 😛

I’ve replied to your replies to my comments in your doc. Are there any other questions you want to ask me?

@rochellaine @catwing @dekreel

I’m here now.

@seekjustice  In that case I should read that part soon. XD

I actually finished a long time ago, and I’ve been passing the time binge-reading all the comments for the KPA.

I didn’t put periods after some of my sentences and it DRIVES… ME… CRAZY!!!!!

Anyway, I think I’ll sign off now. Good to see you!

Byeeee, @rochellaine! you’ve probably…[Read more]

@seekjustice  I mean, if your sister didn’t know I’m not a fox, then that’s fine. XD Just be sure she doesn’t KEEP calling me a fox. 😉

I’m sorry, am I supposed to know who he is? It’s hard to keep track of characters…

@rochellaine  Yeah, that one. XD

I just got to the part where Sapphire is trying to take Kai to the hospital with the help of Rain and another boy.

Ahhhh, the life of a writer…

Yeah, definitely.

Sooooo…. *tries to think of something to say*

@rochellaine  Ooooh, poison ivy. What’s that like? I’ve never had it before.

I’m beta-reading Chelsea’s book. What are you up to?

Oh yeah, you said a long time ago that you would give an explanation or something considering your MBTI. If you don’t want to do that with one hand, that’s fine. 🙂