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Ben Powell replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
That dolphins, dolphins, are the greatest creatures EVER and DO NOT BOTHER DENYING IT
😀 Yes… they’ve always seemed a bit arrogant, haven’t they?
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Snapper started the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Alrighty, guys…
I could use some help on this front. I’ve learned pretty well over the past few months how to show and not tell, but I actually am using that too much.
Don’t get me wrong. Always show over tell, but my problem is that I’m focusing way too much on the emotion. And Ike… Zelaya, they’ve all gone dismal.
How do I refocus my…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
The best character in ATLA is, naturally, Iroh.
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Snapper replied to the topic Out of season NaNoWriMo update in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@hannah-c HANNAAAAHH! Hi and welcome back!
Ooh, yikes, I’m so glad you’re okay. 🙂
Comical autobiography… that sounds hilarious. 😛 Is it about you?
Up to?
Up to much mischief, my dear friend…
I finished my third novel, working on the fourth now. Also started a blog, the link of which you can find down there in ze signature.
I also…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD
Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.
Frozen Raspberry
Bland,
And the gray of night,
Shivering hands.
No light.
I couldn’t fight,
Tasteless.
I couldn’t write…
Numbness.
Why?
A question…
A question for the sky.
Of this evil infection?
Why the gray,
Does…[Read more]
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Joy and
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
OH my GOODNESS.
This is pure gold.
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@skredder Haha! My sibling and I used to play with the chess pieces like that! Give them voices and all that jazz X)
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Thanks! 😀
@perfectfifths Nice! I like the song-like style. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you hear about someone else’s experiences and think: “Hey! I can make a character like that!”
All the time. Can’t keep up with it 😛
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
You know you’re a writer when, as you’re playing solitaire, you’re forming a story idea in your mind about four kingdoms who were scattered apart by enemies, and are forced to cooperate and work together to rebuild them
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 That’s okay! XD
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 Oh, and YES! Totally leave comments! 😀
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@gabbyj Sure!
BTW your signature is awesome 😉
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrenluther04 All right. Dog it is! 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’d imagine somewhere in the tween-early teen age, since that’s how old the MCs are, but I don’t know for sure
@sam-kowal @valtmy Thank you both so much! It helps a lot 😀
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valtmy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
This actually isn’t all that bad. The writing flows nicely and does fit that of a children’s book. Though I agree with @sam-kowal that there is not enough tension that would keep a reader (especially a child) engaged. The story so far seems to be more of a description of the events that are happening as there is not much conflict or…[Read more]
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ClaireC and
Christianna Hellwig are now friends 8 years, 2 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@skredder I’m going to sign off, too. Good luck on your project!
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