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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Help? Does this sound like a good idea? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@HowlingWolf Well I wish I did, but I don’t write books so…no. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus That’s great! One last thing I noticed is this though—the third and fourth sentence both have the same structure. The structure Kate pointed out. So maybe change one of them; I think it’d sound better. You cleared up any confusion though, and I love the last sentence.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Help? Does this sound like a good idea? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Yep, concurrence here too. 😀 It would need some really good characterization work for the kids to keep me reading though—not just a bunch of toddlers who’re one dimensional…toddlers. 😛
Nice ta meet ya, btw! I know you from stalking but I don’t think you were present when I actually came on. *shakes your hand heartily*
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Help? Does this sound like a good idea? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Yep, concurrence here too. 😀 It would need some really good characterization work for the kids to keep me reading though—not just a bunch of toddlers who’re one dimensional…toddlers. 😛
Nice ta meet ya, btw! I know you from stalking but I don’t think you were present when I actually came on. *shakes your hand heartily* -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus whoops, guess I took way too long writing out my post. I wrote that for the third one you posted, not this latest one.
I liked the third one’s last sentence better, with ‘confront’, not ‘endure’. It sounds better, cuz we don’t know he endures it—we just know he’s confronted with it. -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus whoops, guess I took way too long writing out my post. I wrote that for the third one you posted, not this latest one.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
‘No time to say hello, goodbye! I’m late I’m late I’m late!’
I like this one best, especially the last sentence. Not that I don’t like The Count of Monte Cristo (I do 😉 ), but that last sentence makes it sound it’ll be a little less like the said classic. Yours has the same concept, but it makes it sound like it’ll end a bit differently.(As I…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Fun Way to Get to Know Your Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Christi-Eaton Kewel. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Fun Way to Get to Know Your Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Christi-Eaton ESTJs are amazing. 😀 Talk about getting things done! So the description of the ESTJ sounds more like you than the ISTJ, even though you’re introverted? Neato.
@Leumeister I thought it was cool. XD Any two types that have exactly opposite letters are polar opposites, at least in theory. So ENFP, ISTJ—both of those have…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Fun Way to Get to Know Your Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Leumeister They’re polar opposites. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Are we waiting another year for Episode VIII because of Rogue One???
I know! I just want more of this new trilogy, not to be interrupted by some hardly related movie! Maybe there won’t be a two year gap between the second and third in this trilogy though, since there won’t be a Rogue One to take the time. Let’s hope.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Are we waiting another year for Episode VIII because of Rogue One???
I know! I just want more of this new trilogy, not to be interrupted by some hardly related movie! Maybe there won’t be a two year gap between the second and third in this trilogy though, since there won’t be a Rogue One to take the time. Let’s hope.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Are we waiting another year for Episode VIII because of Rogue One???
I know! I just want more of this new trilogy, not to be interrupted by some hardly related movie! Maybe there won’t be a two year gap between the second and third in this trilogy though, since there won’t be a Rogue One to take the time. Let’s hope.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@His-Instrument Any schedule complications aside, I’ll tell you I won’t be coming. Not really being a writer, that wouldn’t be practical. It sounds like tons of fun though, so have tons of fun!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Would all Ohioans please announce their presence? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Hannah-R Any schedule aside, I’ll tell you I won’t be coming. Not really being a writer, that wouldn’t be practical. It sounds like tons of fun though, so have tons of fun!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@PerfectFifths It wasn’t me. I was talking about it too (the types), but @Kate-Flournoy was the fount of knowledge. 😀
She’s also an INFP, btw. 😉And we’re a team about Rogue One. 😛 I think it’ll be interesting (though from the trailers it looks to have pretty bad acting. *sigh*) but I’m not particularly looking forward to it. *shrug* (That is…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic What Can I Do? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien @Daeus hey, that’s a neat idea. That could go several ways, especially with how they’d figure from a different world to fix their problem.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic What Can I Do? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Ooh, if the door’s not going to be in the main library you may as well put it in the cellar @Anne-of-Lothlorien.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Favorites? in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Sarah-H Okay; probably not, if they’re people who like deep things. I don’t think that age would be too young for hearing Les Mis, as long as they’re pretty mature. But I think that Les Mis wouldn’t be the best book for reading aloud anyway, no matter the age of your audience. Parts of it, while not necessarily bad (though a little too detailed…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Quick Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus Well, if the incentive directly related to your work would be an audio of the same book I’d read from you, and not another work of yours or something different but having to do with your book, I’d probably stick to what I first said. The classic would motivate me more (well, obviously depending on what it was. 😛 But most classics to me are…[Read more]
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