Folith-Feolin

@rae

If you ever finish yours, I’d still like to see it! I now it’s too late for you to enter, but I’m very curious.

Honestly I think it revealed too much about one of my characters. And as you know, I am quite skittish to post such things. XD

Congrats, this topic rose in popularity again! I’m glad everyone is having fun! And this whole family…[Read more]

Aaaand I shall cross my arms and back away from this, because I have roleplayed enough already.

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

Without waiting for the group to disappear over the rooftops, Marcel ran at the ironwalker he had previously maimed.

His opponent horizontally sliced its broadsword. Marcel leapt onto the hilt and quickly stuck his hand into the elbow joint. As…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

In defense of the Irish, they were running toward a better armed enemy. They weren’t cowards. 😉

@ellette-giselle

The same wildness that would cause the Irish to break rank and then get ridden down by the patiently waiting English cavalry?

@ellette-giselle

Ah, poor lass. . . So horribly neglected. Thy brothers need some roguery injected into there spines. 😢

@ellette-giselle

Oh hogwash. So you’re trying to telling me that your oh so knightly bros have never poked you, put you in a headlock, or jokingly threaten to plop something slimy, crawly, or moist upon thy personage?

@calyhuge

THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!

@ellette-giselle

Well of course I’m reading it. XD

Ooooffffff I knowwwww. Hurting the poor babies hurts us too…

A threat?

…

Hmmm…

@ellette-giselle

I’M A GUY WITH SISTERS!!!!

@calyhuge

She would have turned inside out, hit the roof, and had a hysterical conniption fit all at once!

@ellette-giselle

I think you can go ahead and give the prompt whenever you want.

And I vote for one word. It makes things so much more interesting in my opinion.

@calyhuge

BWAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHHA!!!!!

95%

(It would have been 100% if Electro Duder had at the end had stuck something green and slimy on the girl neck!!!!)

@ellette-giselle

Okay! I finally got to read through this so far. Here’s my thoughts:

1) Joseph is a dear little boy who might need to be protected from his author.

2) You tend to rely a little heavily on Telling over Showing. For instance, you saying he is struggling with nightmares is unnecessary, since I can see that well enough from his POV…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yep.

Wait a minute.

@ellette-giselle

That is awesome. I wonder if our ancestors fought with, or against each other… XD

@calyhuge

I did think it was funny. I also thought it was gross. Quite gross. Grossly gross. But it was funny.

Still wondering how y’all come up with stuff like that though.

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Okay we should probably head towards the river

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

Marcel doubled over to cough, and punched the wind elemental’s shoulder. It was the best way he could think of communicating friendship.

They had to find a way out of there. He got an idea, and…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Last time I checked, your characters jumped onto the boat with Rina and the rebel NPCs to escape the city. Group 1 is reasonably far off inside the city, fighting. So you are not with our group. 🙃

@grcr

You’re good, lots of people are posting long sections. ;] No one minds at all, it helps to move things forward.

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)

So many enemies still stood firm. But there was still hope to win, as long as everyone worked together.

Marcel took quick…[Read more]

@liberty

Oh dear no. We need more books! Allllll the books!!!!!

XD