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Active 2 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
1. Is it boring?? I’ve been really scared that this doesn’t draw you in and isn’t interesting.
Nope! Super intriguing!
2. Is Sef relatable? Can you really feel her and does she become real in your mind?
Very relatable!
3. Was there anywhere that you were confused?
At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make so…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Thanks for giving specific question, it really helps!
Answering as if I’ve never heard your writing before XD
1. Were you drawn into the story right away?
I was confused as to why the story had so much action before a exposition. It felt like information overload on many things, and I couldn’t tell what was important. Should, I think…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Woah!! I’m so proud of you!! Good luck on your edits! 💖💖🎉🎉
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Wait, what’s this about you writing your epilogue?! Did you finish something big?
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Thank you so much Esther! I’ve been doubting my writing recently and really comparing myself to others, so it makes me happy you like it. I started writing in present tense as soon as I started writing, so after the initial hurdle (it was hard lol, I kept using said) it’s been pretty natural, because I don’t know how write any other…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @hybridlore @loopylin @whalekeeper
Ok this is kinda long, if it looks familiar it’s a complete redo of a scene I posted awhile ago 🙂
I’m at exactly 24k now… progress is slow but going alright.
For those of you who don’t know, Aleshia is Lesli’s new boss but also the mother of her best friend, Tauren, so she grew up…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I’ll show you if I ever finish it lol!
Wow, 35 pages? You go girl!!
Also, love the scene. Erich is really interesting…
Btw I’m not getting notifs for anything you tag me in 🙄 if there’s something you want me to see and you think I missed it feel free to let me know in a update!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh thank you soooo much 😭😭 I’m so glad it’s not the ross I like
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hugo
“Oof.” Hugo wrinkled his nose again, and scowled. “I don’t do strict.”
Nar sighed dramatically. “Well… if that’s how it is…”
“Okay, I’m just kidding.” Hugo couldn’t play the serious part for more than a minute before breaking out in a smile, made of dazzling sunshine. It was just impossible. “All those traditions and rituals sound s…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
No no no –
You don’t understand. They are officially my character, by order of KP signature. See signature, please.
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
I love how you draw eyes! I can’t really pull off anime eyes for some reason… XD
AaaAAaaHhhh my children
MY children
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Those two children of yours are the cutest, I just wanna give Lois a hug…
Hugo
“Heeey, I’ve got it! Okay – watch this -”
Hugo tried again, this time by himself. He made it almost to the end, but slipped up, and finished with a goofy swing freestyle. His feet tapped rhythmically as he tilted his head to one side, grinnin…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh wow, you parents being grandparents is weird O_O
Nicknames is great, I need to listen to it again, so glad you like it! Oh, I like run the world too.
I’ll have to check that one out, I haven’t listened to much TOP other than their really big hits.
Yeah! Totally recommend it, along with a big dose of caution. BTS is a pretty safe…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hugo
Nar had all the elegance of a nightclub performer back home.
When she finished, Hugo clapped his hands together. “Flexible and agile are my two middle names, sister. Okay, you start like this, right?…”
He wasn’t a perfect learner. Only one step at an time. Unlike his rascal brother, who could picture a hundred moves ahead in his min…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Your smile is one.
*squeaks uncharacteristically*
Hugo
“If you aren’t horribly offended, I’ll just call you Miss Nar, please.”
He had never met someone truly familiar with an emperor-run system before. However, an emperor was more or less a dictator, which wasn’t too far from his own world. He hoped her world wasn’t consumed by organized m…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I know, I know XD I want to write, and I have an idea for a scene I want to write today for Leon/Riker’s 3rd book🤫
Oh, really?! Cool! Tag me if you post it pls! Also, I haven’t been getting notifs for some of your posts, so if I don’t respond that might be it. 🙁
Thanks! XD
Oh, yes, draw bucky! I’m currently working on a Mav…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Hugo
Hugo half-hissed, half-laughed, “I’m sure whatever you just said was a good thing, Miss Nar.”
He had practically forgotten his manners in this modern world. For the first time that night, two spots of red glowed on his cheeks.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Jayson
This was awkward.
“Jayson, Rafael, which would you two prefer?” the older man turned to Raffe with a gentle smile. I glanced at my Commando In Arms (I’ll explain later, it has to do with cereal boxes).
“Well,” Raffe paused as if tasting his thoughts before serving them for general consumption. “I think you’r…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
You got thissssss XDXD I’m on Christmas break and am going nOwhEre so, behold.
…Everyone does stupid stuff XD BUT I would not call you stupid. You have an innocent track record on here, and that would be unnecessarily villainous of me.
It’s official, Nar has a crush on Hugo already.
OH MYYy that’s so sweet of her!
I just hope he…[Read more]
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Enid posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
Happy holidays, KaPeeFers!!!
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