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Active 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Ah, I see. How is this?
“An elf lord who employs orcs.” he straightened to face Travenor. They stared at each other for a long moment while the rest of us stood in suspense. Well, not me. I knew.
“For the love of life!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was him.”…
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Erm…….he probably thinks that’s great…..
*Whips around towards door and screams*
Ellette, what have you been saying?!
XD
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨
but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.
Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)
If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.
How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD
I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?
Ideas ideas
– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit
– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.
Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.
Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
OOOOOOPS. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun. How is this?
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him. Bân-Sercëon.” He spat out the name in a half-voiced growl.
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Aaand I’ll reply to everyone else, but I have to go. *Poofs away*
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whaley replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
That type of randomness must be preserved.
I agree. You can definitely keep that vibe and just make up the rules for yourself so you stay consistent. You wouldn’t have to tell anyone the rules of the system.
It seems like your magic comes from fantastical animals. I don’t know if that’s true, but I do think that would be a great source of…[Read more]
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whaley's profile was updated 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
I’ll try to join. Do you have a deadline yet? =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Throwing in a short RP.
Leo
He raked a hand over the back of his neck and let out a soft sigh.
“We need a plan to either make these creeps move on, or kick them out. Not sure which one of those will be easier. Although…” His gaze trailed over to Quincy, sound asleep with a fist curled in Silvia’s skirt. He…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you world build? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
That’s pretty cool! I haven’t read a lot of mythology, or books with fake religions, but having a base for the mythology out of “real” history makes sense. In fact, something like that might help solve a few issues of my own, like why this other country has such a mixed up system of government and religion.
*Gazes off into the abyss*
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Koshka posted an update 1 month ago
It’s a dangerous thing, a dream.
To look beyond the first horizon
The might, the would, the could.
To say to a mountain, be cast into the sea.
Yes.
It’s a dangerous thing to dream. -
whaley and
Stepheroni and Cheese are now friends 1 month ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
Bye!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
Well…I gotta get to bed. But I may try to come on and post about my WIP some more tomorrow after church. Night yall!
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Koshka replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
YES THE TRASHGRIFFINS
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