@folith-feolin
Active 1 year ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 18 hours, 31 minutes ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 19 hours, 1 minute ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 19 hours, 15 minutes ago
Three kids with emotional problems have to shut down the black market for exploding eggs.
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Koshka replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 19 hours, 25 minutes ago
Two peasants reconcile a kingdom in civil war by deciding their uncle can drown.
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Koshka replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 19 hours, 33 minutes ago
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 day, 1 hour ago
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Hi, Marcel! Are you excited to be interviewed?
[Puts his elbows on his knees, foot bouncing. Looks reasonably focused.] “Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”
How old are you?
“I got somebody to run all my physicals and I should be fourteen or fifteen. But there are strange things out there, things that should be in my…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 day, 17 hours ago
I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 17 hours ago
Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 day, 17 hours ago
This is a weird question to ask, but does anybody want to interview Marcel? I’m feeling icky and can’t think straight enough for the roleplays. I don’t know, just want something cheerful to do. @loopylin @rae @godlyfantasy12 @savannah_grace2009
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 1 hour ago
That would be lovely, if you please
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 3 hours ago
Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.
I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
Boom, finally caught up
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Koshka replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 6 hours ago
You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*
*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*
I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.
You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 8 hours ago
I should have been clearer. XD I was talking about this chapter but also recent events in the book. One of the last chapters had this:
“Thisss one, Iver?” he slapped his knee, shaking his head. “You sssay your power comesss from this weakling?”
Iver stared at him. “She isss not as weak as she appearsss.”
Sef blinked hard.
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whaley started the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 2 days, 21 hours ago
Summarize your story in one weird sentence!
It needs to be both accurate and strange at the same time! This is just for fun; I don’t recommend you put this summary on the back of your book. But it takes a dose of creativity.Here’s an example with Lord of the Rings (the summaries can be longer than this): A guy with hairy feet can’t let go of hi…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 21 hours ago
My beautiful baby and his beautiful snoot
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whaley replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 22 hours ago
I like it! I like how you’re beginning to integrate action on Sef’s part. I definitely want to see an explanation for why she is stronger than other people the pythonos use. I’d guess her strength comes from hope, but she doesn’t seem to have any up until this point.
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Power replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 days, 18 hours ago
A thought on star light millions of light years away.
If you do a Bible search there are several verses that mention God stretching or bowing the heavens. (Isa 42:5, 45:12, 51:13, Jer 10:12, 2 Sam 22:10, Psalms 18:9)
Take a look at Strongs H5186. It’s pretty cool! 😉
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 18 hours ago
If you didn’t know, this is the roleplay Jonas started. I personally loved this roleplay idea and it would be nice to continue.
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