Kingdom Pen | filewriter@base13x | Mentions https://kingdompen.org/members/filewriterbase13x/activity/mentions/ Activity feed mentioning filewriter@base13x. Wed, 22 Apr 2026 18:47:41 -0400 https://buddypress.org/?v= en-US 30 hourly 2 0a2543860e0e925c079e286c6c13f839 Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-21/page/20/#post-77699 Sun, 04 Nov 2018 02:25:44 -0500 @valtmy @jenwriter17 If anyone wants to word war too, that would be great. (I do like these questions still. 🙂 )

@rochellaine @seekjustice @ariel-ashira @dekreel @warrenluther04 @sarah-anson
@princessfoo @filewriterbase13x Any of y’all on? Want to word war?

]]> 7942559c4d36f59d2e03ef536948d1b3 Catwing replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/a-dog-in-the-kingdom-of-pen/page/13/#post-76010 Wed, 08 Aug 2018 02:41:41 -0400 @warrenluther04 I’m just going to post your cover here, cause I finished it a while back. Yay.
(I hope you didn’t want color cause I didn’t…. I left space for words. I could add them or you could.
@dragon-snapper Those are melted chairs behind you.
@dekreel sitting… thinking about some book probably.
@sam-kowal Stan has probably grown a lot…[Read more]

]]> 3dfa5f438c2d6251805a9db654065602 Joy started the topic The Beast is Back! in the forum Start HERE http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-beast-is-back/ Thu, 24 May 2018 06:29:36 -0400 ‘Ello, Kapeefers, Emberites, Writers! I’m back from a one-and-a-half-month hiatus.

At this point, most of you are probably at Story Embers, but I thought I’d drop in here and say I’m BACK! Sort of. Maybe. Depends on the workload.

Anyway, if you’re relatively new, and we haven’t met, talk to me!! I’d love to meet you! 😉

And if you’re not new,…[Read more]

]]> eed02b5af26ef12498a12ac4326e430c WarrenLuther04 posted an update: GUYS! I'M PUBLISHED! /The Trials of Ualair Fencaryn/ is […] https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/79690/ Sun, 13 May 2018 15:35:43 -0400 GUYS! I’M PUBLISHED!

/The Trials of Ualair Fencaryn/ is available in the collection of short stories, titled /Transmogrified Tales/. It is available on Lulu, which will hopefully be accessible on…[Read more]

]]> 1 866fc6dbd2ea972444dfb0cf41a7f6fe Ben Powell posted a new activity comment https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/78958/#acomment-78959 Sun, 29 Apr 2018 21:34:34 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Cool! I’ll check it out.
So I guess that the forum is still functional even though the site is not active?

In reply to - filewriter@base13x posted an update @ariel-ashira, @livgiordano, @ingridrd, @catwing, @supermonkey42, @sam-kowal, @dekreel, @julia-r, @warrenluther04, Hi Guys. Sorry I haven’t been on a lot lately. I have been […] ]]> 5a1423d6ea2cd7859fed54bd5ad06111 The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/6/#post-71742 Fri, 27 Apr 2018 19:18:59 -0400 @filewriterbase13x  *snorts* If I think i’m fit to rule I truly have lost my mind. 😀
Good job! I enjoyed it. My favorite part was also when Daeus and Josiah were arguing!

]]> 3de66cc9bb327f54ad5bc28e2bd15e23 Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/6/#post-71458 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 22:44:07 -0400 @jbb I didn’t write it. @filewriterbase13x did. I just pasted it from my email, since it didn’t take.

]]> 7d3974418114eee6b83a29065d34d032 Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/6/#post-71451 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 22:24:42 -0400 @jenwriter17 You’re welcome.

@filewriterbase13x I have actually been on when Kingdom Pen was being edited. Sort of like a reboot I guess. 🙂
First it was having a bit of trouble and logged me out. I logged back in. After a minute and a reload the formatting changed and it was dark blue instead of green. And lastly the site changed to show a…[Read more]

]]> b22f07b509584e454532a351d576dac1 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/6/#post-71436 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 17:50:42 -0400 @catwing thanks for posting it for Filewriter 🙂

@filewriterbase13x This might be my favorite part! I’m looking forward to the next 😀 (Daeus and Josiah’s argument is hilarious)

]]> 398e3973513841377f2d38a821138b3f Skredder replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/6/#post-71423 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 14:19:45 -0400 @filewriterbase13x That was an excellent part! Notta is queen now! Oh my!

]]> 1cc87e0c47dd3a9d82c1dcde997be81c Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/6/#post-71410 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 01:47:25 -0400 @catwing Thanks!!!

@filewriterbase13x Oh, goodness!  Daeus and Josiah arguing?  Notta taking over?  I cannot imagine that! 😀 Everyone has truly lost thier minds!  @daeus is king, @aratrea is the Wiser! 😉

Oh, @the-real-kapeefer this is your time to usurp the throne!

]]> 38cb2706d25b55af1c5fe33cc831c8a4 Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/6/#post-71407 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 01:38:56 -0400 filewriter@base13x wrote:

A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part Five: King Who?

I ran with the dog, who said her name was Skredder, and the purple giraffe, Kaya, at my side. B-bot and Catwing flew above us. I was of course not sure of where we were going, but the dog seemed to…[Read more]

]]> 94f6e8404a7f480f77189855ac9ef5c0 Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71406 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 01:37:43 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Sorry I left For a while and didn’t tell you. I love both these parts! Of course Wonder creatures deal with lost minds on a regular business. They tend to hide in closets, under beds, and in sock drawers. If not there you could then try your left shoe. 🙂
I must have really lost my mind… I even said I don’t think. O.O
The…[Read more]

]]> 090f3d87b304bb9569b8fdef4a4f208f Ben Powell replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71405 Mon, 23 Apr 2018 01:07:11 -0400 @filewriterbase13x I have the whole story in my email, so I can still stick it on the Compendium.

And I must say, I loved my part! 😉

]]> ca7b1f58381ac32c935e8805b1af5304 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71403 Sun, 22 Apr 2018 22:52:46 -0400 @filewriterbase13x I can see it in my email, but not here.

]]> 7e6f8cdfce1e0b4f91a83880384134b8 Skredder replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71401 Sun, 22 Apr 2018 22:23:41 -0400 @filewriterbase13x I can’t see it except in my email. It showed up fine there. Not here, though.

]]> 83bff27757a53e9bdf3216d57f2c91cc Jenna Terese replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-71381 Sun, 22 Apr 2018 02:13:47 -0400 @filewriterbase13x oh, you wanted us to leave comments in your google doc right? I was just reading it and leaving all these comments and then I couldn’t remember whether or not you asked for that.

]]> 825324a8106003abda0c0367659f8a15 Jenna Terese started the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-16/ Sun, 22 Apr 2018 02:10:08 -0400 Guys, we go through these way too fast 😛 It’s awesome.

Writers’ Corner #16!

@seekjustice @ariel-ashira @filewriterbase13x @jane-maree @jess-penrose @alia @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @dekreel

Rochellaine, thank you for your sympathy for Rin, though she would’ve probably wanted the chocolate 😛

hmm, I ‘m not sure how to convince someone to…[Read more]

]]> ad818eed87ae714c80ae5a1609d88fb1 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-71312 Sat, 21 Apr 2018 00:58:44 -0400 @filewriterbase13x That’s okay. 🙂 I have access now! 😀

]]> 11db9fa65a691446510ca67ff3edf55e Skredder replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71201 Thu, 19 Apr 2018 14:18:26 -0400 @filewriterbase13x The reference is Piglet from Winnie the Pooh. 🙂

]]> 718bed45fb8d37d4b2c68b5e8ea59347 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-71114 Wed, 18 Apr 2018 17:48:24 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Oh good!  And I like B-bot. 🙂

]]> 08d1dd30933cb78e7318448becf8b6fb Jenna Terese replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-70968 Tue, 17 Apr 2018 03:13:30 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Sorry it took me so long to read this part of your story. This was great! I’m really enjoying the story so far 🙂

]]> ac21a7f3f2da7566a6dd8e12c517fdab Sam Kowal replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-70918 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 23:00:06 -0400

“I was going to try to explain to the friendly giraffe that we had lost our minds and believed that she had too,”

@filewriterbase13x XD XD That was a really excellent installment

]]> 1ee36b0603cc586da1f55c2b48ff8615 Alia replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-70912 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 19:24:03 -0400 @filewriterbase13x, THIS IS FANTASTIC!

if you have space to add me you can, if not thats fine

]]> 4fe47e0de6240acfacd4b4b91b418548 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-70905 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:26:13 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Your stories are so fantastic!!!  This is great!  The way B-bot talks makes him sound both cute and wise. 🙂  But I have to ask…what is a B-bot?  Is it something you made up?

*patiently waits turn to be in story*

]]> a0c65253c9b6d4007c5b76e306d6058a Joy replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-70904 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:04:38 -0400 @filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

]]> 958898a1b262073537aee60a9fa64d21 Jenna Terese replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70900 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 03:13:35 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Yay! I’ll try to get to this Monday or Tuesday 🙂

]]> b3c727da19a41c8ba543a9026594a4cf Kaya Young replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-70899 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 03:05:04 -0400 @filewriterbase13x    Oh Wow! I love this so much! Thanks for putting me in! 🙂

I think the line “I was going to try to explain to the friendly giraffe that we had lost our minds and believed that she had too,” could explain all of kingdom pen. Lol. 🙂

]]> b1c5d485ae24abd40e7b163ce9729fef Ben Powell replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70896 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 00:21:17 -0400 @filewriterbase13x It’s not that I didn’t like Madelyn. I just found Frederick especially interesting. 🙂 Sorry if I’m being too critical…the story is good.

Ah, cool. I was wondering about that a bit, but I haven’t seen many typos. Part Four made me anxious for the next one.

]]> 7c1d972ce02f1c6275158e67a4460885 Skredder replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/5/#post-70895 Sun, 15 Apr 2018 00:03:40 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Everyone?! Oh d-d-d-dear-dear! (please, someone tell me they know that reference!) That is most peculiar. Though I have to admit that if everyone has lost their mind, it does make sense what kinda happened to B-bot.

You included me!! Yippee!! Thank you! 😀

]]> 976f4f03baacb2f3e79157f312f17e84 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70891 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 23:55:13 -0400 A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part Four: The Losing of Minds

“How? How could I have lost it? It must have been during or after the storm. The storm. Why did I remember that but not who my neighbors were?

I was walking through a forest that I didn’t remember the name of,…[Read more]

]]> 140d654c4efb107e29501cc907783692 LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70890 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 22:21:26 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Yes! That’ll totally work! And I know what you’re talking about.

]]> 7411246d122b844800d7e35942bdd1b3 Ben Powell replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70864 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 17:21:37 -0400 @filewriterbase13x That’s a nice start to a story. Here’s my honest critique.

1) I would almost say it’s too detailed. Let me explain: in chapter 1 there’s a lot of backstory and explaining of the MC’s past. To me it kind of bogged down the story. I would suggest telling some of it but saving other parts for later. It would also increase…[Read more]

]]> ab1857e48c0c20b9996f712bdb7db66e LivGiordano replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70862 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 15:55:33 -0400 @filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.

]]> e34919b717d61861e6dd9595f092d41e LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/page/2/#post-70824 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:59:12 -0400 @ariel-ashira Oh really? That was you? Congrats on getting published! And I really enjoyed your poem! XD. I’ve tried memorizing Broken. And I’ve only gotten like the first two lines.

Yup. I beat you too it. 😉

So…I would rather not let the whole world see my work, so could I share it with you through Google Docs via email?

Lol. Yes, @filewrite…[Read more]

]]> 5b1e6ea097452fc1745865244d76f83d Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70819 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:38:21 -0400 @livgiordano Yes, please post more!!  It really has helped me.  I memorized it.  I think of it all the time.  And good job getting @filewriterbase13x to join.  She’s been awesome!  Did you read The Light Triumphs?  Its the first I have submitted to KP, but you might enjoy it.

]]> 9e5e8bc6c9f57922e24330bb3d12e675 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70811 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:22:00 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Okay, sure.

I think you were pretty detailed.  You could describe the room and the people’s faces a little more.

I have a good idea of the guy.  His face is not clear in my mind though.

The emotion was good.  It wouldn’t be bad if there was more though.  A few words describing it a little more would help.

I would def…[Read more]

]]> adf0916a6fc547234b11d1e5c4553896 LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70810 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 01:17:14 -0400 Lol yes. @filewriterbase13x is a very good friend. And if you don’t mind me mentioning it, I was the one who recommended that she should join. 😉 This place is pretty cool. *high fives back* And yes, I can definitely say that you’re one of my best friends, girl.

]]> 79be9f5e4d28a0e459c28fd688d62270 Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70800 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:44:28 -0400 @filewriterbase13x I like it!  Its really good!  I think its well balanced with the things you mentioned.  What era is it?  Modern?

Do you and livgiordano know eachother?

]]> 53daef795b068d25b787370ac9d8e4c9 LivGiordano replied to the topic Needs Answers in the forum Novel Critique Requests http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/needs-answers/#post-70797 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:28:52 -0400 @filewriterbase13x I would totally go for this if I hadn’t already read it. 😉 *nods* To everyone else, go for it!! It’s soo good.

]]> cfcc9e6626dc4591bd715752cfefaaa0 Catwing replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70793 Sat, 14 Apr 2018 00:08:25 -0400 @filewriterbase13x This is worrying. You have lost your brain.
If I only had a brain!
Did you also turn into a scarecrow? XP (If you don’t get that joke, I can explain)

]]> 4aa202f554668b815d1f34b422200848 The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70752 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 17:09:58 -0400 @filewriterbase13x  Oh no! I hope you find it!

]]> 322de163704d189fb05b0dcc8c06ff58 Rochellaine replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70744 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 06:32:37 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Great job!  Both the story and the characters are very interesting.

]]> 47dcc84b3dc7b8e102f8a8ddaf4d9329 Ben Powell replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70737 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 02:08:06 -0400 @filewriterbase13x So, you “truly lost your mind,” you might say. 😉 Nice.

]]> 08183a882fcc0234a325c4b9fd002c9a Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70734 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:50:19 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Bye! See ya later! 🙂

]]> 94d0a6a529817c747ee6be6dfc7e7b01 Skredder replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70733 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:48:45 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Oh dear! That is worrisome! Very worrisome indeed! This is getting really good!! 🙂

]]> 8b7b435f5e8523dd1d9db442b79a5cb3 filewriter@base13x replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/truly-lost-our-minds/page/4/#post-70729 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:38:01 -0400 A Kingdom Pen Adventure: Truly Lost our Minds

By

The File Writer of Base13x (@filewriterbase13x)

Part three: After the Storm

I opened my eyes eyes slowly, groaning as I sat up. Confused, I realized that I was on the floor. I rubbed the soreness off of my cheek. I noticed golden sun rays shining through the little gaps of the window shutters.…[Read more]

]]> d48d025fa17faea7e16e3a8011eafba0 J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70728 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:29:26 -0400 @skredder @filewriterbase13x
Ugh. I actually have to go now, but I’ll hopefully be back before all too long…Happy writing! *waves and vanishes*

]]> c0cd5a600a13e6bc3398d99648e9c44b J.A. Penrose replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70727 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:26:45 -0400 @filewriterbase13x Steampunk is generally the concept of society taking a different time path at the Victorian Era to what has actually happened in history. So, lots of fun.

https://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1249132-SteamPunk-A-List-of-Themes%5D

]]> e8c0f996d6acc9d52eaf533ac0e30b68 Skredder replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions http://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/writers-corner-15/page/39/#post-70726 Fri, 13 Apr 2018 01:25:07 -0400 @filewriterbase13x From what I have been able to gather, the setting is usually Victorian times, before electricity, where technology evolved slightly differently. Everything is steam-power instead of electric powered, including airships. Other things are based on a lot of clockwork and many people wear goggles. There are probably some parts that…[Read more]

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