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@dekreel I may read over it soon if you still need advice.

Oh yes… My poem.

The Empty Notebook

The empty void starting up at me,
Broken only by straight black lines,
Begs to be written I agree,
But how to start, my brain whines.

The sad notebook remains blank,
Too many ideas and ways to start,
A message, a shock, or maybe a tank,
I want to skip ahead to a different part.

“Come on already! Write…[Read more]

@epicaddie2 That’s really funny to me, since I saw The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy recently. Reminds me of the song they sing and them flying into space. “Good bye, and thanks for all the fish!” 😀

@dekreel Another great part!
*cough* Well, I have weird things happen cause of the Wonder Portal.
I had the chairs appear so that whenever @dragon-snapper says anything she can melt a chair after. See her tag.
I’m not saying you should change it. It’s great! I’m just saying. 🙂

Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.

To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.

Maybe, you could…[Read more]

@pickupyourpenandwrite

Good idea 🙂

I write for a lot of reasons. It’s something I really enjoy, and I like creating stories. I started because I was inspired by other stories, and I thought… I want to do this. I want to create amazing worlds and powerful characters.

My mind is always thinking about story-related things. I write because I…[Read more]

@ashlyvye I kinda know what you mean. I started reading from a young age, but there’s been times when I’ve not read much or not much good. Yeah, Robinson Crusoe basically invented the ‘survival’ genre of storytelling. I liked that one 🙂

Thanks! XD Hah. You mean like the Simon Cowell who had Grace Vanderwaal on the show he does? XD My last name…[Read more]

@hannah-c I’m not sure if that would bother me in an autobiography. In, say, fantasy, it usually does, but only for part of the book. Short chapters around the climax to make everything feel like its slowing down and giving each moment significance can be great toward the end. I think, in an autobiography, it wouldn’t bother me as long as they…[Read more]

@gh24682468999
I have pretty limited experience with poetry, and especially free verse. I just wanted to drop in and say how awesome that poem is- it’s kind of the exact thing I like, sort of a slightly dreamy, fantastical narrative with a strong emotional pull.

@gh24682468999

😀 XD That’s my favorite line in it, by far

Chairs, Stan is coming for you.

@dekreel 😀 😀 Awesome! I really like how this is a series with little pieces. XD The cake into Perfect Fiths… that was funny.

@ariella-newheart 😀 Those are really epic

You definitely have a knack for nice lines. The Song of the High Elves is my favorite 😛

@hannah-c Yep. If it was funny, and the narrator was entertaining, then I wouldn’t care if I didn’t know who they were. 😀

@ashlyvye Besides Brandon Sanderson, other fantasy and classics, mostly- Harry Potter, The Inheritance Cycle, Ashtown Burials by ND Wilson, Lord of the Rings, Narnia, The Prydain Chronicles, etc
I’ve also read a lot of older books for school, Like A Tale of Two Cities, Beowulf, Jane Eyre, etc.

😀 Other than of course Sanderson, what about…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart  I love those!! I think I like the first one best 😀

… Oh, wow. I’m the only non-Aethasian you tagged *smirks in amusement*

@hannah-c  I would! I admire charm and humor in an autobiography 🙂

@ariella-newheart  Have fun! XD

@gh24682468999  I love it! It’s pretty!

The only thing I would do is make it easier to understand. Because I’m not quite grasping the message 🙂

@ingridrd  *bows*

@aratrea  Yeah, sorry, I should have considered this would happen XD *nervous giggle*

@ashlyvye

Wow. I am EXTREMELY late. Somehow I missed this thread until now. But then I saw you had Vin as your profile pic and just had to comment! 😉

I am currently reading Hero of Ages (Mistborn book 3). I only discovered Brandon Sanderson earlier this year when I started Steelheart…and then I read the entire Reckoners Trilogy in a week.…[Read more]