Felicity

@savannah_grace2009 no, I don’t think you should delete it, per se, especially since it’s so important to the story, but it would be a good idea to clarify with a trigger warning in the beginning, like I said. Or have it happen long before the story starts or something.

I will admit something similar is in one of my WIPs, but I never make any…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @everyone else in this discussion

Sorry if I offended you. I didn’t mean it that way.

I don’t mind that the scene’s there, and I appreciate that it wasn’t graphic at all. I’ve seen worse. (do you know how GRAPHIC high school anatomy books–CHRISTIAN high school anatomy books–can be in the reproduction chapter??? UGH!) My…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

1, 2, and 7 are my favorites.

@whalekeeper

This is a hard situation. I’m not going to tell you what to do, because I haven’t dealt with such situations before, and I’m not going to claim any authority on the subject (though I do have family who might be able to help). That being said, the biggest red flag to me is her parents. If she is not only willing, but actively…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed your book is next. Lol.

@ellette-giselle you have published books too right? Where can I get them?

@kyronthearcanin I bought your book!! I finished it a few minutes ago. It was AMAZING. There were a couple of editing errors, but honestly I could look past those. How many do you have planned for the series, and when do you think the next one will be coming out?

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay!! I love it!!

@rae @theshadow

Sniper

Fairy had done some fine work, in my opinion. The creature fell at her feet, dead.

Silvanis came to her and kissed her forehead suddenly, lookin’ up at us, startled, when he remembered he wasn’t alone. “Uh, you guys didn’t see that.”

I chuckled. “No judgement ‘ere, mate. I’m sure we’ve all done somethin’ similar.”

I…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle ooh your blurbs are nice!

also @rae Tenz is awesome, terrifying as he seems….

lol

@everyone ok! I’ll introduce the character tomorrow cause I don’t think I have time today…..sorry!!

@ellette-giselle bruhhhhh that’s so true lol

also that’s so sad how Sef’s dad just left. But I can’t say I haven’t done the same. Something similar happened to the protagonist and her twin brother in my current WIP…..

@savannah_grace2009

Snake’s teeth. (don’t mind that it’s just my personal expression of surprise)

If you don’t mind me asking, are you over 16?? Because man, that chapter with what happened to Sef’s mom is a DARK thing for a young teenager to be writing about.

I hope I’m correct in assuming that the book will be 16+ as well because…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So pretty!! I love the soft shimmery feel of your cover.

My only critique on the cover is that the words feel a little crowded and off balance, like they were shoved into the top of the picture. I might move your name to the bottom of the page, enlarge the words, and drop them down a little bit. Maybe even flip one or both of…[Read more]

*considers what characters I should have drawn next…*

@ellette-giselle

I’ll try my best to read through your WIP, but I can’t make any promises since I’m also helping two other people with their stories. (:

@ellette-giselle

That is so cool!!

@theducktator

I look at it briefly in the beginning and sometimes go back to look at it. It honestly just depends. Like, I love the maps in the Wingfeather Saga, but in some other books, I don’t enjoy looking at the maps as much, lol.

@ellette-giselle

It looks so good!! Did you design it yourself?