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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr
Hugo
It was awful to wake up, but even more awful to be woken up by a girl crying out in pain.
“Ottoline… Ottoline!” He said gently touching her shoulder, “are you alright?”
Her whole body was shaking with fright and tears began to slide down her…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@everyone
*gasp*
I have the best idea for Amir’s rp! It has to do with Ottoline. I’ll write it tomorrow because I don’t have time rn.
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Allison replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 11 months ago
Every time I try it, it just says error, is the link misspelled?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 11 months ago
@Anyone
Some more intriguing questions for anyone willing to discuss!
What happens to those who don’t have the opportunity to learn about the Savior in this life?
Where is the line we must walk between scholarly rigor and child like faith?
Do we discern truth based off of what feels right, or what has more logical substance? (More and more C…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I just noticed that I’ve been writing Amir as pretty serious, but he’s a lot the opposite. In fact, he can be childish at times. (Not exactly immature, just playful, I guess. If that makes sense XD) But this is actually the first time I’ve ever written in his POV. 😬
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@everyone
I think the door should be locked, that way as the costume party dies down they still have a objective that forces interaction, finding the key.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Hi Min!! <3
It’s going really well!! Sis was home for the weekend!! 🎉 Yesterday morning was a little rough but it improved drastically when Church actually started.
Glad you got to see your sister! <3 sorry it was a rough start though!
We had an AMAZING service of worship and feeling led to not preach his sermon, our Pastor cal…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@grcr @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazor
Kaine
“Oh boy, I’ve done enough talking. Anyway, where are you from, Kaine?”
Kaine gives the boy a quizzical look as he stands on one leg like a flamingo.
And goodness, for fashions sake? Caps are to protect your eyes from the sun!
“I live west of the Crevasse. A bit above the west…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@esther-c @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer
Heres a new part!
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A boy in tan robes walked up to Hugo. He looked friendly.
“Hello, my name is Amir. You are Hugo, right?”
Hugo grinned, “Hey, yeah. I’m Hugo. Nice to meet you!” They shook hands.
“It seems like no one knows how they got here, like no one sent…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @I-think-I-got_everyone-XD
Oh and just so everyone knows, Amir is wearing a tan, robe-like outfit that looks wrapped around his body. But instead of being a robe all the way through, the lower section splits off into wide-legged pants. He’s wearing soft s…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 12 months ago
Mormon is the nick name for the Church, so there isn’t really any difference😂 That being said, we prefer to use the true name of the Church, because it expresses that we worship Christ, and that He is the core of the Gospel, many think we worship Mormon, when we don’t. Mormon is regarded as a great profit of God, but this isn’t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Woah. I lot has happened. XD I’ll get to writing my RP later this afternoon. 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yes Lane said hello, and asked him how he got to to the house 🙂
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@savannah_grace200
Hottoline? LOL!🤣 😂 🤣 I love it!
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Ahh man, I literally just barely missed the next chapter reveal. I guess I’ll have to read it tomorrow🙃
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 12 months ago
Ok, I’m finally gonna get through the rest of your chapters:
I enjoyed chapter 3. It functions as a proper first chapter (Lilitu is the real main character, right?), all the previous ones seemed more like a series of prologues. This is fine, The Way of Kings, the first book of the Stormlight Archives by Brandon Sanderson did…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Apologetics in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years, 12 months ago
I suppose that’s a working explanation. Where Christ is the solid, the Holy Spirit is the liquid, and Heavenly Father is gas, expressing the hierarchy of God’s physical manifestation. Both solid and liquid are confined to this earth, whereas gas can permeate through all of space. I like that explanation more than the egg one.
Once…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
@grcr @anyone else
“Hi there!” Kaine looks up at the sound of a cheerie voice next to him. He looks at the figure with a questioning gaze, staring at the long wheeled device tucked under one arm, and his cap, which sat backwards on his head.
“Well, we aren’t quite sure who owns this place… yet…. but you can come in if you want! I do hate to…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
ok!
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