Felicity

@savannah_grace2009

I love that explanation, lol.

Okay, I’ll work on it! This critique has been so helpful! And no, it doesn’t feel too harsh. Thank you for being honest about what I need to fix. Also, I know I need to make this clearer (I don’t explain it in the story at all, just my thought process when I wrote this) but Sef and Lilitu had p…

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@rainmaker

Hi Divinity! (That’s a beautiful name by the way). I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, finding divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy, and my current project is a universe I’m working on with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (hard…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I finished it, and it did mention that they were older, so it’s clear that a lot has changed, but this is still a similar issue with the one I posed earlier. We might be starting to follow the same characters now, but your darting around there own stories too much. The last we saw of Lilitu was the boy limping home, then…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Haha! Really? I have friends who used to do that, I think it lasted for a couple of years, 😀 My brother is 13, and is the typical 13 year old (gross jokes and humor, things like that XD ) When he was 7 I think he was just obsessed with Legos, but I dont quite remember 🙂

@whalekeeper

😂 And I guarantee you will watch it again!

@hybridlore

Thanks! I also followed you 🙂 The one I did was private with a few pins, is that the right one?

@rainmaker

Hi Divinity ! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and  I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food, writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. Oooh! A historical fantasy muder mystery sounds exciting! I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen! OK, no…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Girl I legit started laughing!!!

Haha! I’m glad! Hugo is so funny, (I based him off my brother so I have plenty of ideas, lol!)

@ferwhen_grace

Oh, I just read that, a few things about me?? Hmmm..

I just moved cross country

I have 26 pets (One dog, two Guinea pigs, two parakeets, three ducks, five guinea hens and the rest chickens)

I have been home schooled since first grade.

I do blog, (heres the link if you want to check it out 🙂 )      acancello.blogspot.com

I lo…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I’m good, thanks! How are you doing?

@fernweh_grace

Hi! Of course you can be here, everyones welcome 🙂 lets see…. I dont really have the patience to look at moss, my mom and brother love to do it, but I cant really get into it. I do loooove to look at paintings though! I haven’t read any of those books you listed either, but I am…[Read more]

@trailblazer @acancello @freedomwriter76 @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings

Amir

Amir quickly hopped up out of the pile of shoes, bouncing on one foot for a moment as he regained his balance. He pasted on a goofy grin. “I’m fine,” he said with a chortle.

Thankfully, nobody really cared or payed attention to him for very long. But i…[Read more]

@anyone

More questions worth discussing:

How do we know that we interpret Scriptures correctly, when there’s so many different interpretations found? (This is different from a discussion of translation)

How do we discuss dilemmas that seem unique to our era and have no (seemingly) direct reference to what we see in scripture?

Anything else?

@everyone

General Conference Oct 2023! Streaming sessions Sat 30 through Oct 1s!

h ttps://www.churchofjesuschrist.org/media/broadcasts/watch-saturday-live-sessions?lang=eng (delete the space after the h)

@jonas

That sounds good, what you developed so far seems like a good base to start for him.

Yeah, it’s interesting to have those kind of quirks in a magic system, like the nats in Mistborn.

Divine/magic influence is always the simplest way to go. Many point out that saying “a wizard did it!” is bad, and in a certain context this is true, but…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I like the new character you introduced in chapter 4. I don’t think you shared a chapter 7 yet, but I started chapter 6, but it seemed like there was some kind of gap, where the characters are somewhere different without explanation. Is that intentional?

@jonas

I like Vilsayor, have you developed his character much in terms of things like motives and such, or is he just plain bad?

I like that you fixed the magic system to implement more even structure. That sort of thing would have driven me nuts. Though it does make me ask the question of what makes these sorts of interactions fundamental in…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hi! I’m Keilah. The first half of your name was funny to me, because my uncle owns an ice cream shop by that name!

We LOVE roleplays lol. There are a bunch, they’re mostly kinda dead/going slow right now, but I’m sure if you joined one it could get everyone to remember them lol.

We also share LOTS of story snippets. There’s a…[Read more]

@hybridlore lol

@hybridlore doing good! how about you?