Felicity

@freedomwriter76 nice!!!! That is pretty good!

@jonas all righty! I’ll be back with a Snake RP in a couple of minutes.

I have a custom-built Lego minifigure of him chilling on my computer right now lol. Fully human, not dragon (he wasn’t a dragon in the universe I pulled him from), but still.

@jonas wdym???

like we won’t get the that point yet or we abandoned that storyline completely?

@calyhuge whaaaa

Wild Kratts actually existed???

JK, I tend to forget that the TV shows I loved when I was younger and then abandoned actually were real shows and not cobbled-together memories.

My favorite episode was the one with the cheetah racers……

and who in their right mind thinks the Revolution was a mistake??? If you traveled…[Read more]

@calyhuge Astronomy sounds too much like Tech lol

Right now he’s in the middle of Ev and Fallon’s awkward conversation, so he doesn’t have much to offer, but if they met he’d probably go yakking off

I could see him looking to her like he does his older sister, Emerie.

@savannah_grace2009

About prologues…I’ve never heard that before! Mine is technically a first chapter, so should I just erase the label of “prologue”?? 😂

You do whatever you want, girl, it’s your story. XD

I had actually never heard that before, but it kind of makes sense. I think some writers also use prologues for info-dumping. I’d rather have…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Jayson

This was awkward.

“Jayson, Rafael, which would you two prefer?” the older man turned to Raffe with a gentle smile. I glanced at my Commando In Arms (I’ll explain later, it has to do with cereal boxes).

“Well,” Raffe paused as if tasting his thoughts before serving them for general consumption. “I think you’r…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

💖💖💖

@savannah_grace2009

Ok so in this RP I say Liv has blue eyes, but correct me if I’m wrong. 😂

Lukas

Lukas found he couldn’t take his eyes off Liv’s face. He tried, but somehow, he found himself drowning in the crystalline pool of her blue eyes.

“Aww.” He heard a whisper pass by him. He blinked and looked behind him, only to see Fynn dance awa…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

First of all, I love your writing!!

Second, my actual answer to your question. XD Ok. So I think I prefer the first one better. Though I do have an opinion on prologues… I heard an author (who had been writing since forever) say that he doesn’t like prologues because typically writers use them as a way to draw readers in bef…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

it’s all true though…I became such a better writer when I joined KP and after talking to all of you guys!!

I did to! I dont think I would have ever got this is close to finishing without everyone on here <3

Ok, I read them both. The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning chapter. That’s all I have for now, I will go over it more later today if I have time!

@savannah_grace2009

This is supposed to say “feel free to tag me in any post”…so yeah…XD

Dont worry, I understood XD I make errors like that all the time 😂

Awww your dedication and acknowledgement is so sweet 🥰

@savannah_grace2009

I have skimmed through these pages here and read pieces of your WIP and I have to say… I love them! Your really good at describing the way things look and feel. I will defiantly look through your link and give my critique 🙂 And pretty soon I will be posting some of mine to get feedback, I’ll be sure to tag you 🙂

The dancing has begun!

Hehehe…

Alright, I’ll write some RPs

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas

Lukas swallowed hard and faced Liv with an uncertain smile wobbling on his lips. “Well?” He held out his arms.

@rae (I said in here that Chase was dancing, but I don’t know what you decided to do)

Callista

She smiled, all tears dried, and met Fynn’s ey…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh that’s awesome! You can tell her I love her name. 😉

I was trying to choose between Clementine, Maisie, Hallie, and Dixie. It was close between Maisie and Hallie, but Hallie won. 😁

*over here