Felicity

@ellette-giselle

I like number 7 best I think. The title feels like it is part of the picture.

Jonathan, you reckless, courageous, foolish kid. What did you think you were doing? (I think you’d get a long just fine with Vulkasin to the rest of the world’s danger)

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

@kyronthearcanin awesome!!

ooh, and I have an idea. Once you finish two or three books, you could create a “guide to Orythia” with a map of the planets (and key locations on each one), descriptions and pictures of all the different creatures, and maybe some tidbits from each of their lore.

@grcr this is late but Tsunami is a a cool name! I like the board, it’s cool.

@ellette-giselle @rae @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings

I was going to introduce my new character today, but I procrastinated too much on making a description you all could follow lol

is it ok if I wait till Monday to do it? I have something on Sunday I have to do and won’t be able to post a…[Read more]

@rae yessss we should restart this

given that I have Jaylen/Huntress and Mundy/Sniper already in one RP, I was a bit iffy about continuing this with them, but honestly, the more I think about the more I want it to happen. (It’s not like I haven’t stuck a charrie in two or more RPs before. Hunter, Crosshair, Snake…..)

also Tenz would be cool!

@ellette-giselle lol I think I remember seeing that somewhere.

@savannah_grace2009 no, I don’t think you should delete it, per se, especially since it’s so important to the story, but it would be a good idea to clarify with a trigger warning in the beginning, like I said. Or have it happen long before the story starts or something.

I will admit something similar is in one of my WIPs, but I never make any…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @everyone else in this discussion

Sorry if I offended you. I didn’t mean it that way.

I don’t mind that the scene’s there, and I appreciate that it wasn’t graphic at all. I’ve seen worse. (do you know how GRAPHIC high school anatomy books–CHRISTIAN high school anatomy books–can be in the reproduction chapter??? UGH!) My…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

1, 2, and 7 are my favorites.

@whalekeeper

This is a hard situation. I’m not going to tell you what to do, because I haven’t dealt with such situations before, and I’m not going to claim any authority on the subject (though I do have family who might be able to help). That being said, the biggest red flag to me is her parents. If she is not only willing, but actively…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed your book is next. Lol.

@ellette-giselle you have published books too right? Where can I get them?

@kyronthearcanin I bought your book!! I finished it a few minutes ago. It was AMAZING. There were a couple of editing errors, but honestly I could look past those. How many do you have planned for the series, and when do you think the next one will be coming out?

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay!! I love it!!

@rae @theshadow

Sniper

Fairy had done some fine work, in my opinion. The creature fell at her feet, dead.

Silvanis came to her and kissed her forehead suddenly, lookin’ up at us, startled, when he remembered he wasn’t alone. “Uh, you guys didn’t see that.”

I chuckled. “No judgement ‘ere, mate. I’m sure we’ve all done somethin’ similar.”

I…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @ellette-giselle ooh your blurbs are nice!

also @rae Tenz is awesome, terrifying as he seems….

lol

@everyone ok! I’ll introduce the character tomorrow cause I don’t think I have time today…..sorry!!

@ellette-giselle bruhhhhh that’s so true lol

also that’s so sad how Sef’s dad just left. But I can’t say I haven’t done the same. Something similar happened to the protagonist and her twin brother in my current WIP…..