Felicity

@loopylin

Once he gets bored or figures out how bad these guys are, he’ll leave. He still has some standards.

The Society: does some not nice stuff

Dante: Nope, I’m out

The Society: why?

Dante:

sorry for pulling Sniper into this like I have with everything lately…..haha…..but I couldn’t NOT use the meme for this purpose.

@grcr ohhh makes total sense! Very cool!!

@linus-smallprint I’m getting caught up!

Eric, I feel ya about how you’d rather be drawing than be sporty. LOL.

You should give a glossary of Rorian words at the end or something! It might help the jokes stick better. The explanations actually make it funnier than the jokes would be alone, but I still feel like something’s missing. I like it…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I could put one in, cause I have a bunch, but don’t really feel like it because writing from the perspective of morally bad characters is really hard for me lol

@calyhuge no, it specifically isn’t supposed to really affect the school, but it’s used as an explanation as to why there’s so many military oriented characters here, and that kinda thing.

@grcr nice!! I like their clothes, what time period are they from? (IDK anything about that lol)

@koshka what’s raspberry blood?????

@ellette-giselle oof I haven’t been active here haha, sorry.

@smiley ooh nice!! interesting character concepts.

@esther-c

You’re welcome! I love children’s writing, and am thrilled to see someone else here on KP showing interest. Most writers here, if you’ve noticed, write either romance or YA. Not that those aren’t genres that desperately need good books, they’re just not where my passion lies. *Shrug*

@mineralizedwritings

Bucky looks so good!!! I’m not an artist, but the shading ended up really good!

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, I really like the second idea!!

Actually, I was just thinking about it today and I noticed that Miles likes to have things under his control, so it wouldn’t make sense why he would willingly give Audrey away to someone, where he has no control over what the rest of her life looks like. A kidnapping would probably make t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Thank you so much for your input!! You’ve given me a lot of inspiration to draw from and I loved hearing what parts of books impacted you the most when you were younger!

Write not only for their “now” but also for their “tomorrow.”

Remember that souls are the same size, no matter their age.

I gotta pin these on my wall…

@freed_and_redeemed

I enjoyed it!!

There were a few things that I thought weren’t as good as they could have been though. I felt like Leon became pretty repetitive for at least half of the book. Isaiah kept saying similar things to him and he kept responding the same way. It did show how bitter he had become, but I did find it redundant and n…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah I probably should have specified more. I’m super into fashion so most of my characters dress semi formal and I forget other people don’t do that lol.

@loopylin nice, that sounds kinda like a warrior cats name haha

but yeah, I haven’t come up with anything cool for my pairings yet either XD

@whalekeeper @loopylin About ship names….

Recently I’ve found there’s another way of titling ships. Rather than just combining the characters’ names, you can use one or two words that have an aspect of both their personalities or are related to them or their character arcs. This helps if the names combine into something really weird, or just…[Read more]

@theshadow you’re welcome! I didn’t see your post until now because KP is apparently wigging out and won’t send me emails to any of your latest posts for some reason.

@ellette-giselle oooh nice!! I like those boards! I’m not much of an aesthetic person honestly, but I might make a few for my own characters someday…idk….

@whalekeeper

Gotcha! =)

@ellette-giselle @loopylin

Leo

He smiled again, vaguely trying to remember how people shook hands here as stood to take the offered hand.

“Ha, no. My school years are long behind me. Which reminds me,” he glanced around the dim break room. “students shouldn’t be down here.”

He gave a half sigh. Two girls were standing in the shadowed…[Read more]