Felicity

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Jocelyn

“Y-Yea…I’m just…” She sighed. “Worried for Nyx…” She looked down, rubbing her arm. She stood at the door for a moment. “He…won’t be happy I told you this but…when I say we understand, I really mean it. I mean…I may not have been physically abused or anything but…we’ve been through some stuff… and Nyx…he…well. I thi…[Read more]

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Aramis

Aramis growled, “You’ll pay for that Baumann!” He tackled Leo to the ground as Edrich stood back on his feet.

He and Leo wrestled for a while, each getting in a few punches. Aramis spat blood hitting Leo square in the jaw. Leo kicked him off.

Edrich glared, wings flaring. “Enough!” He yelled.

Aramis looked over.

“N…[Read more]

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I’m sorry girl, I would’ve responded sooner but I’ve been at yoga with my grandma and then went to eat lunch.

OH MY GOODNESS, GIRL!!!! I’m in love already!!! Oh my gosh that first chapter my heart was breaking for Leon😭😭❤️❤️❤️! Riker!❤️❤️!! Ughh!!! Sweet Riker and Leon. And Ezra!! Poor Ezra❤️😭. This is SOOO GOOD!!! I need more!…[Read more]

Oops I didn’t mean to tag u twice @freedomwriter lol I thought it had glitched and not posted

Wanna go @freedomwriter76?

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Aww, thank you! I sometimes feel like it’s not, even though multiple people have told me how good it is, lol.

Yeah lol! Listen to them 🤣 it’s good!

@freedomwriter76 u wanna rp??

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Lol congratulations. I am thoroughly conffuzled.

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Oh! Also I’m not saying you should tone it down. I think it’s important to represent what people went through! Also I feel like your story effects me more than other history stuff because your characters are so good! 😂 Keep at it! Like I’ve read history stuff that had sad scenes in it, but it didn’t effect me as much because I…[Read more]

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Thanks for the heads up! If I stop responding at some point don’t worry about it 😂 I’m just really sensitive.

Hmm.. I’m not sure about Riker… 🤔 This is confuzzleing

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Yeah! Leons personality really shows. But with that, it gives me an immediate opposition to Riker. Curious to see how you’ll change that 😄

yeah check it ou! It’s a great book.

Oh also I always listen to music while I’m doing anything writing related, and I just happen to be listening to “Fight on, Fighter” By for king and…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @loopylin Sorry if i forgot somebody!

Kaine

Kaine’s boots scrape down the rough wall as he tries to climb up higher. Pulling on a small crimp in the wall, he heaves himself up a foot higher, bringing his body in close to the hold. His hand holds tight to the edge on the large rock, but he feels his fingers slowly…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 my poor November 😭

@freedomwriter76 Ok, I’m back! @godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon

Hunter and Omega

Ezra led the way to the science classroom. Hunter and the others trailed behind.

Behind him, Hunter could hear Omega excitedly talking, asking weird and totally random questions like “What’s life like back at your home? Why don’t you humans have…[Read more]

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Oh my heart! 😥

You have some really good tension build up! I gotta say, you really do a good job of portraying how awful the location is. I can almost feel the place’s… “Moral Stench?” is that a thing?

I’m not really feeling for Riker your sweetheart yet 🤣 but I can see your subtle hints that he doesn’t want to be doing what…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 awww! Sadly Paxton isn’t used to “teasing” in the good way….

Paxton

Paxton stared at the spot Aadalheide had swatted Abelard, heart lurching. His chest locked, hands gripping his pants.

Waiting…

But…

Nothing happened…

Abelard just…

Laughed.

Smiled.

Paxton’s heart was nearly beating out of his chest.

He…he…[Read more]

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November

Edrich crossed his arms, “You know we never did get to finish our little discussion earlier.” He walked toward Leo and Riker, wings flared. The two lackeys with him followed. “I really didn’t appreciate you’re interruption earlier…in fact, all of your brothers are turning into quite an issue…” Edrich said to Leo.

Leo…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 oh man Aadelheide XD she sounds like Lyn, but uhh I have a feeling she’s totally freaked out Paxton!!

Paxton

Paxton gripped the side of his desk, eyes flashing and a loud gasp escaping from his throat as a girl next to him, who’d just finished loudly addressing another boy, turned, addressing him.

He scrunched into his sea…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 kk!

(btw, I’m gonna make November 16 almost seventeen and Ara is seventeen. In the normal series November is a bit younger then Ara anyway. I just like November being younger lol)

November

“I understand…I mean, sorta. I don’t really have brothers to not tell,” November laughed. Leo chuckled, nudging November in the shoulder. N…[Read more]

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• Yeah! Feel free to tag me if you do post it! (I can’t promise I will read it, I can be      really sensitive with certain topics)