Felicity

@mineralizedwritings Ok, I love that!! Their reaction to the rain is so cute and hilarious!

@felicity

Yep. Not being able to fall asleep because your just dying to work out that charries backstory 😂 Happens to me sometimes. I tend to write the best sad scenes at bed time. Who knows why, the darkness outside seems to help a little.

@felicity @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76

Y’all. I’m so proud of y’all sharing your opinions and some of the things you are going through. I’m a pretty sensitive person too, and I’ve felt embarrassed about it before. Thank you all for sharing, and I hope you know that being sensitive is not something to be embarrassed or ashamed of. And if…[Read more]

@felicity

Glad you liked it! 😁 💛

Pulling people’s heart strings is probably one of my biggest goals as an author! Happy I succeeded 🙂

And yes, he’s so innocent. 😊

@felicity

Thanks! Glad you like him!

I do too 😁

@felicity

No that wasn’t too long winded! I’m glad to hear what you think, and I agree. 😀

I haven’t read anything in your story that seemed to dark at all! Actually, your story has really inspired me to make Tauren and Lesli a bit more fun. I always wanted to them to be a bit like sibling afterall. Mt older sister just moved away recently, and…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Your welcome 😊!

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness, girl!! Tauren!! He’s so sweet and innocent ❤️. That was pulling my heart strings 😂❤️😊. I love their relationship!! And that scene was so sweet 🥲❤️!!

@loopylin

Yeah!

I thought most of it was teenage angst too, which tbh, I was tired of. It’s all over the place in public school. So I figured I’d ask people about it, and I’m glad I did! Not to say none of it is teenage ansgt, I don’t know if it is, but I’m glad to get to see some of the deeper reasons people write the way they do.

@loopylin yea, there will be quite a couple dream scenes in my series due to the fact that Ara has an ability relating to dreams/visions

@lightoverdarkness6 thank you!!!

@loopylin totally understand, and backslashes can definitely be overused!! I tend to enjoy using them in the castle as ways to show/write scenes that might appear in my actual books but in the actual books themselves, I agree, but they can be powerful when used in the right way.

Love what you said about the quirks and showing the abuse and…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Don’t worry, I won’t share any with spoilers 🙂.

@godlyfantasy12

Whoa that looks cool!

@koshka

Yeah, I would agree there are good things about being sensitive, I just never felt like society lined up with that. I tended to be that one kid who wouldn’t go to church youth events because I couldn’t handle the movies they watched, LOTR. It was a bit painful and made me feel more disconnected then I already was. Instead of being patient…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

I understand about being ‘overly sensitive’, although I’m not sensitive in the same way. I pick up emotions around me, both from real life and characters. And I have quite a vivid imagination, which tends to not forget the images I read. I understand this, and am accordingly careful. I was also raised with a stricter idea of…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! 😁 Glad you liked it! Definitely one of my favorite scenes to write yet.

@mineralizedwritings AHHH I loved that!!! Ok so that was EXTREMELY cool how you showed their reactions to rain for the first time like no one really thinks about those things, but of course they’d be freaked out and think the world is “Broken” I mean…it’s freaky for someone who has NEVER seen it!

Especially already hearing the things/st…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, I know how it feels. During like 7th grade for me, I came to the realization I had not been living like a christian in some pretty major ways. It hit me like a wall of bricks, and I would start breathing hard any time I remembered. The only way to shake the feeling was to overshare to my mom, which was good because it kept…[Read more]

@whale-keeper

@theloonyone (to read a spoiler or not… 🤣)

Anyone else interested can look at this, it is a spoiler though. Would have put this in your happy moments topic, but it’s also a spoiler, and it isn’t completely happy. But mostly. It’s one of my charries getting over a fear.

Idk how familiar you are with  my plot, but they lived…[Read more]