Felicity

Wowwww that is a humungous post 👀

guys how do you spell humungous?????

@theducktator

Don’t worry, I added it!!

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much girl!!

@theshadow

Thank you! I really appreciate it!!

@youthreegirls @keilah-h @grcr @smiley

Sorry for dropping off the face of the earth there for a little bit! I was still editing I just forgot to post, lol! So here’s a chapter dump for y’all!! (I apologize if I’…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint I’m a girl and I agree with you on that lol

@ellette-giselle makes sense. I still feel like something’s not right, but maybe I’m just looking for little tells you’ve put in your other stories when the main characters get captured/executed that aren’t there in this one, and that’s throwing me off.

@ellette-giselle

I’m not sure if this is what it is, but you said the Empire doesn’t take its own people to be slaves, yet there are two Imperials in the “care” (read as “horrific torture” lol) of a slave trader (that might not even be Imperial?) I feel like more people would ask questions, or at least be curious. The soldier that’s bribed into…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep!

Reading through it again, I realized most of my “improvements” were already there and I missed them, but there’s still something I can’t put my finger on that doesn’t make sense.

@ellette-giselle honestly hybridlore’s got a point. It happened as a result of their faith, yes, but it’s been long enough in the story that readers might not be paying attention to that. Also, no one’s brought up why they were captured. I’ll get into that more once I’m finished with math work so hold on a sec. I’m not against what’s about to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle ikr??

@ellette-giselle

Oh don’t worry. Things will be bad.

It’s crazy how this kind of sentence excites us.

Writers are nuts.

@theshadow thanks!

currently debating whether I should do some of my other ones today.

@godlyfantasy12 Go for it!!

@ellette-giselle wow, not even at the town yet and they’ve already gotten into a tangle!

I agree with Linus, drawing this out rather than having them immediately get rescued or escape or something makes it more interesting.

@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!

@freed_and_redeemed oooh! I like it so far! If you write any more please post it.

@godlyfantasy12

YES?!?!! XD

@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!

Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?

@whalekeeper

Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.

Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.

@loopylin @raxforge

Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?

Syph

“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”

Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]

@raxforge @loopylin

Apology? Whoops, I think I missed one. I’ll rp in a minute.