@felicity
Active 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @loopylin
Asher
Eddie stared at a corner of the room, nervously holding her tail in one hand and combing her fingers through its fur with the other.
I could feel the tension in the room, and my stomach felt queasy from it.
“Blue…” she began to say, but then stopped.
“Er- I mean yellow! Like my hoodie.…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I can go! 😀
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Lol I get it! How much to share…
XD I’d love to hear it!
The baby for sure! 😭 thanks for the warning, for some reason screaming does get me so that’s good to know. I can skip those scenes though.
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
YESS PLEASE DO!!!! AHH I LOVED that scene that you shared once from November and Ara’s childhood and I’ve wanted to know more, but I didn’t want to like press you…
SO YES PLEASE!!!
AND NO!!! You do NOT talk about November too much!! I LOVE hearing about the baby!!! 😍😍💖
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I’d love too! XD Honestly your enthusiasm for characters is catching.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @joy-calle @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @elishavet-pidyon
Idk where to share this so I’ll do it here XD
so I really want to indulge myself XD and share some of November/Ara’s character arc/relationship arc (which is intertwined cuz the relationship affects the character arc for Nov…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@kyronthearcanin You’re welcome! I LOVE your story ideas so far. I’ve had ideas kinda like it but haven’t exactly fleshed them out much.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin I’m ready to join! I have a couple of characters I haven’t done much with yet……they’ll be fun to work with! I might also add another couple sometime.
Meet Reed and Aurelia! I haven’t used them much because they’re not super developed, but I thought I might put them in today.
Mike: Reed and…Aurelia, right?
Reed: Who else would…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oops, Aliens autocorrected to Allies. That’s the thing I’m most sensitive to in movies. Ok, good to know! Yeah, maybe one day I’ll watch them. I’ve never seen a marvel movie in my life so… same as other marvel movies doesn’t help me a whole lot XD
Ok I like that they let you figure out Bucky’s backstory instead of just showing…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Bren
Bren looked up, shaking from head to toe. He flinched as one of the men stepped closer, bending down to his level.
The man smiled slightly, eyes softening. Bren’s breaths shuddered, but evened just a little, seeing a small bit of comfort in the younger man’s eyes. A little something that made him think of his brother.
“Hi…what’s your name…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Wow! That was fun, I can’t wait for more!
I have one thing you could add. It doesn’t actually have to do with this particular chapter but with the layout of the entire book. In series such as Wings of Fire or Warriors, where there are multiple factions of characters battling (dragons and cats respectively) the book opens with an…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Ha! Hitchens and Crosshair are going to go at it in a couple minutes if Feather doesn’t stop them….
Crosshair
“Well, it has been a while……Why are you so tense?” Hitchens asked.
“You don’t deserve to know.” Crosshair hissed.
Don’t let him push you over the edge. You know he wants that.
He’s no better than…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Character Ship Game Show✨ in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! That explains it all 😀
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings Good! I love his story arc.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AWWW VLAD 😭 at least Bren will have a bit of comfort
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
XD Good one! Well he might be shocked that he goes from being a humble boi living underground to rescuing people and becoming a dad, but he thankfully doesn’t die. XD I would never!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh ok, wow!
I LOVE HIM!!!
XDXD 😭😭
poor boi, sounds like an awesome story though! Do the captain america movies have allies in them? Like what kind of violence is it? I might want to watch them one day XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@mineralizedwritings That’s cool! Hmm…..Maybe……
“My face when my author tells me something horrible is gonna happen to me in the next book.”
Lol…..
Nothing TOO terrible happens to him, right? Like he doesn’t die or anything?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Anyone want another Fanfic??? 😉 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I just learned about the “Question-Begging Epithet” fallacy in Logic, which was really interesting!!! That’s the biggest thing I’ve found interesting, lol! XD
Sounds interesting!! 😀
And just learning about different Pharoahs and stuff in History. 🙂
Cool!! I love ancient history. It’s second to modern history. Pretty much from…[Read more]
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