@felicity
Active 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
That’s true, but side would be very hard for them to keep balanced, unless they were double sided, or just super small. Then once again, there’s the neck issue. If they never developed much for military, living in peace with one another as well as with the other races, then it would make sense that they don’t really develop their…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Ok, I suppose that makes a little more sense for the Felisaro, though even with that, this is going to be a major hindrance to their development as a race in comparison to the others as @keilah-h mentioned, but there is a lot of interesting dynamics you could get into with that if you wanted. Using short range weapons still seems…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@kyronthearcanin You’re welcome!
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Allison started the topic The Scrapbook! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@esther-c @lighoverdarkness6 @loopylin @janellebelovedpig @power @booksbyjayna @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper and everyone!
I had a great idea! We all should do a scrapbook! Just post a little bit or a lot whenever, you do something your proud of in writing! Share your characters, story, great ideas, want to thank somebody or just leave them a…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Yeah, that would make for some interesting history! Btw, @kyronthearcanin , do the Arcanin also use their mouths, or do they use some other method, like their magic?
@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just brainstorming, I guess.
Yep XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Fair point. Although this might have not been a current thing–perhaps it happened in the past, and the arcanin quickly settled it….and that helped the felisaro too, even if it wasn’t intended.
@kyronthearcanin If you don’t want to listen to our suggestions over the course of this discussion, you don’t have to! We’re just…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
And you’re so welcome!! They are so entertaining and I love reading them!! 😀
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic What's a question??? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Would anyone like some fresh questions to ponder?
Who has tasted protons before?
What do protons taste like?
When did you taste said protons?
Where did you taste said protons?
Why did you taste said protons?
How did you taste said protons?
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Yes…
You heard me right. (Unfortunately 🙁)
I’ve been mapping out his character arc…and, well…
That’s the end of it.
BUT!! He is redeemed before he dies. But yea…when I said before I don’t feel bad for him much…I do feel bad for him here. But Dylan…I feel SO bad for Dylan…
😭😭😭😭
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Right, yeah that would make sense, but don’t the Arcanin also walk on all fours? As their known as the kind you don’t want to recon with, being seen as by far the most powerful of all of them?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Oh, I meant it as more of prejudice than actual truth. I mean, we’ve seen they don’t like halflings, and we’ve seen the serpenree treat the lupinari with contempt.
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
❤️❤️❤️ Thank you!! 🙂
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 AW BREN 😭😭😭😭 And @freedomwriter76 I RARELY feel bad for him, honestly 😂.
Even when speculating his death
Godly, you write Vance so well!! Like, that’s exactly what he would do, (unfortunately 😬). I really love reading y’all’s RPs!! They’re always so good 😀
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! The issue with that though is it seems already pretty well established that the Felisaro somehow get around this, and are quite advanced. Unless they did take longer to advance, or maybe even piggy backed of from some of the others, but even that would come with a wide set of difficulties, going back again to…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
I can’t yet, about to wash some dishes 😅, but I’ll try to later! 😊
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 LOL, Hitchens….call him that to his face and he will kill you.
Crosshair
“I’m not entirely sure how to get home…would it be fine if I travelled with all of you? I don’t want to be a bother.” Hitchens asked.
“No,” Crosshair snarled, at the same time Feather said, “Fine.”
What?
He turned to her. “Are you serio…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@sarafini I used to hate writing, but loved telling stories. When I was eight or so, my parents got me a little book of prompts and a notebook that had a section to draw pictures in. I wrote a little story about an electric eel called Tesla, and a sequel about him making friends with a talking helicopter called Blade.
Several months or maybe a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@thearcaneaxiom Your point about Dune not having thumbs is interesting, considering the fact that Quelin and Rina apparently have them? @kyronthearcanin Is that a major point in the story? Like maybe the other species used to (or currently) look down on the felisaro because they’re “lesser” or “not as advanced” because they don’t have thumbs.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I’ll try to get one done today!
@mineralizedwritings LOL. His wings do look awesome.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Ok, I’m so sorry for not responding to this after so long, I just now was able to get around to reading it. It’s really good! I like the cast of characters you got going, and you really seem to be building up on the idea of whether or not Quelin is friend or foe, is that going to turn into a major theme or arc?
A few…[Read more]
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