@felicity
Active 2 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve into the despair a bit more, but other than that everything is good.
Thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
weird little writing prompt that randomly appeared in my brain last night and made me cry cause of how sad it was:
so anyone who’s seen Infinity War and/or Endgame remembers that planet where they get the soul stone from, where someone has to die in order for the other to get it?
pick two of your closest characters. Could be siblings, could…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago

A manatee
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago

The back of a van
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago

Sandpiper
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
That is so exciting! I can’t wait to finish it.
*Dumps confetti on your head*
Work is letting up for a bit (as in, about to be over for the Summer) so I’ll actually have the time I want to read and comment.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle I see it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
Also somehow I got Jonathan’s look perfectly in my mental image. Huh.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@ellette-giselle the image of Michael on the top left looks like the main character from Tron Legacy lol
For some reason, I kept imagining him with slightly darker skin, and I think the reason for that is because I have a very faint memory of someone possibly named Michael who had a dark tan kinda skin tone. But I don’t know who he was, o…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Rant away! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I have new information on this part of @whalekeeper‘s point:
But sometimes fans are just exaggerating for funsies. Take Steve from Stranger Things, for example – people make fanart of him babysitting the other protagonists on leashes. It’s funny because they take his older brother role and dial it up 200%. Sometimes fans do the same thing with…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year ago
@hybridlore oh no!! I’ll be praying!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year ago
@grcr awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Rant away! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@the_lost-journal yeah.
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
I just looked back at the chart thingy and realized/remembered I’m to give you feedback ect. what types of feedback would you like? Do you need help becoming unstuck? I’m up for pretty much anything; story, brainstorm, writing, nagging–whatever you need and or want.
And ohhh. Yea, I’m behind too. Fell off the train…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
@rae I’m interested in how it turns out too!
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Koshka posted an update 1 year ago
*watching the rain*
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year ago
It also sounds like some kind of reddit post.
lol
For some reason I thought you were the same age as me, or within a year at least.
I don’t have much advice though, sorry. All of my birthday parties these days are me getting my writer friends to come over and we joke around about our stories and do some painting. My family is big…[Read more]
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