@felicity
Active 9 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️
Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.
Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months ago
Once you’re done with that one, I have a completely different pair of characters I wanna see in your style too, but if someone else wants their character drawn I’ll let them have a turn first.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months ago
and here’s a model of her I put together:

The little snake is just there for fun. You don’t have to draw him (unless you want to)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months ago
Here’s one drawing I have of her, you’ve seen it before most likely:
(feel free to draw Sniper with her if you’d like lol. If you decide you want to, I’ll post his stats. Although given how much I talk about him you probably know all you have to in order to draw him, heh)

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Keilah H. replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months ago
@grcr ok! Here’s the character I’ve been using in roleplays across the site–from a recently-finished story in the current series I’m working on. She’s one of my most well-developed characters, and I draw her a lot, so I’d love to see someone else’s take on her.
Name: Her real name? Jaylen Mundy. Her callsign? Huntress.
Age:…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Also, apparently I haven’t shared the mock cover yet!! (At least in this forum) Here it is! (At the end of the story XD)

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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Also…
Look! I found little Hallie!! 🥰

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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @grcr @smiley @keilah-h @theshadow
Ok guys… 👀 I know it’s a lot to read, but I’m dropping the last 6 chapters!! Enjoyyyy! And then give me alllll the feedback! I’m planning to finally start on the official third draft soon.
Chapter 27
Hallie rolled onto her back and let out a sigh, staring at the dark ceiling…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months ago
Girllll, you’re so sweetttt 🥹 Thank you so much!! Your comments mean so much and are one of the reasons I keep on going with this book bc I know there will other people out there who will like it just as much 😭🥰❤️
OMC GUYS GUYS GUYSSSSS
I FOUND A SONG FOR EASTONIt’s “Cars and Phones” by David Dunn
It almost made me cry but…
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Esther replied to the topic The Great KP Search in the forum Questions and Support 9 months ago
Just in case… (also lmk if the doc isn’t working or you can’t edit/access it)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you!!!!
You are getting so much better at guys and girls!
I’m glad you think that! Been practicing a bit.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 9 months ago
I have art, finally! Lol

Chell from the Portal games as she appears in my stories. Also, her brother, a fan character of mine. You might remember him if you’ve seen the Hero Forge image I posted a little while back. His name’s Alex, but he’s referred to by his middle name, Jonathan, because there’s another character that goes by his first n…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months ago
She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.
lol that’s cool.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 9 months ago
@grcr wowwww that looks awesome!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol
I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll
Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol
Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 1 week ago
@rae That sounds cool!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 months, 1 week ago
Lovely! It looks like a book my brother would pick up at Mardel.
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