@felicity
Active 3 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Adonial Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
So I have a few questions about this. Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French. This is fine, just thought I’d mention it. If you want to pay a little more attention to the…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 9 months ago
Sorry I haven’t responded to this one until now. I think it’s good. All that I would mention is that the history tangent with the pythonos while only a paragraph or two, felt a little sudden. Lilitu is young, and while he may be thinking about these things, I think this part would flow much better if you made it much more of a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @thearcaneaxiom @rae @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @smiley @sorry-my-brain-broke @anyone-else
I need help.
I’m trying to choose an ending for my novel. I thought I had it figured out, but now I’m doubting it. Either way, someone is going to die, so read at your own risk.
First, her…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I feel like they’re going to be good friends from now on. I don’t know why.
I know! It’s awesome 😉
Ev doesn’t really have any guy friends in his storyworld…. I kinda feel bad for him. At least he has his brother(s). 😂
Ev
“We never knew any family besides, well, us,” Tech said, curling his tail around his legs. “I enjoy creating…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Fynn
“I-it’s odd. I-I never have had something quite like it. I like it.”
Fynn smiled and gave Chase a friendly pat on the shoulder. “I knew you would.”
Chase tensed and pulled his shoulder away slightly. Fynn got the message and withdrew his hand. He grabbed a piece of pizza, chomping into it. “So this is your first time eating pizz…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
XD enjoy!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@smiley I know…….
It’s the same in Star Wars. I can think of literally two characters who’ve had a fully happy ending.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Tech
“Yep. I’m the middle child. Which is obvious to anyone who knows me.” The boy chuckled. “I have an older brother and a younger one. Oh, and by the way, my name’s Everton. Feel free to call me Ev.” He reached out to shake Tech’s hand, seemingly unperturbed by the dragon claws.
Tech smiled back at him. “All right, I’ll refer to yo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ev
“Five, actually. Two of them are older than I am. And two sisters.” The boy clarified. “What about you? Do you have siblings?”
“Yep. I’m the middle child. Which is obvious to anyone who knows me.” He chuckled. “I have an older brother and a younger one.” He paused for a moment. “Oh, and by the way, my name’s Everton. Feel free to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c Thanks!
@everyone else I’m actually not sure where to RP. I think I’m waiting for someone to either go after the creature and kill it, or for someone to hit him hard enough to knock him out. Either way, it’ll free him from its control.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@calyhuge “mea culpa” means “My fault” in Latin, right? It could be roughly translated as “Oh, my bad.”
Tech
“Three brothers? That must be fun.” the boy said, pulling out a suit.
“Five, actually. Two of them are older than I am. And two sisters.” Tech clarified. “What about you? Do you have siblings?”
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Oh I love that! 😂 (ugh, I haven’t RPed here in a while. Amir is just kinda sitting around watching everything happen. XD)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @trailblazer @acancello @mineralizedwritings @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @anyone else
I drew Snake being attacked by the creature yesterday! It took me 3 hours lol. I just colored him today.

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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
“Yeah, pizza’s good,” Liv said, her cheeks flushing a darker shade of blue. Fynn smirked at Lukas and elbowed him, pointing with his eyes at Liv. Liv buried her hands in Xandro’s blue mane, trying to distract herself from the embarrasment.
The next few days were sure to be awkward ones, that was for sure.
Awww ᾗ…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
or in his right mind, whatever
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin you’re welcome! Also, I like your profile pic.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 oooh Snake’s definitely gonna apologize for that once he’s awake
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings bruhhhh
lol I had a dream once that I was catching these, like, foot-long lizards that could swim
I felt bad because I found a huge one but it was dead
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
@freedomwriter76 ahh, we all have that one charrie we can’t stop thinking about
For me it cycles between several.
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