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Active 3 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle well I enjoyed the boxcar series for a while when I was younger, I think the thing was that I never really took them as particularly realistic anyway lol
The original series was written at a time when the market wasn’t oversaturated with “kids always know better” content, so it wasn’t as bad then, but yeah I can see problems in…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@linus-smallprint the chapter, what glitch?
@ellette-giselle yeah I get you on not liking the “Children disobey parents, keep secrets, do things the parents say no to, and in the end it all worked out because they were right and the parents were wrong, and there’s NO consequences for all of it” thing. Like, it’s not like parents aren’t wrong s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle yeah it’s been a while since I watched the show, but I remember that scene/episode quite clearly. It was really well done.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle @thearcaneaxiom ooh I remember that scene, that was a really good show.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
also great moodboards!
And the “feeling like he’s a failure, stemming from pride” actually makes a weird amount of sense.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle ooh wow! Super sad, but still a great job showing the harsh reality of death in war, especially on the losing side.
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
As a professional human male, I would be happy to offer some of my thoughts. What I think should be realized is that when it comes to gender, not every man is the same, and not every woman is the same. Men and women will have general differences, but a man can still be masculine while still showing off what might be considered…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
@anyone else
I just saw if and it was really good, have you guys seen it? It’s not the kind of thing I usually watch but I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
@linus-smallprint wow! That was interesting!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@rae haha yep
looks like Sniper got back at Silvanis for calling him “weird hat guy” or whatever it was he called him.
@theshadow @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicle22
Sniper
“…To get past my strong immunity, another thing from my father, it’d have to be some sleeping potion. Though, it could just be they used different m…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@everybody
oooh I might go back to this forum sometimes!
Personally, I’m weird:
my best friends are my brother, my cousins, and a few fellow writers (at least one of which knows three ways to kill somebody with a fork), and the only male out of all those for the longest time was my bro before a guy joined my in-person teen writer group…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
WHAAAAA
I have tubi! YAYAYAY -
MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
WHY IS EVERYTHING GOOD ON PREMIUM 😭😭😭
seriously, I was going to watch nichijou to help with my Japanese learning and it’s on premium.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I so agree with everything you said there.
 I will also say that from my personal experience I seem to make friends less quickly than at least my sister but it also seems that my qualification and value for friendship is much deeper.
It could be a personality type difference too. I’m just like that too. I haven’t had a in…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 years ago
Oh it looks really good! I’ll have to see if it’s free on crunchyroll…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I would approach any character as an androgynous person first, and build up a semblance of personality before developing them with gender in mind. Because otherwise you might fall into your default female tropes.
Yes this
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Just as a tip in general, it helps to think about the roles God made a man or a woman to fill. Woman are the emotionally unstable mothers, while men are the factual, rational fathers who keep the wives from going insane. A man and a woman balance each other. Idk, maybe that isn’t a helpful tip at all, but it sure has helped me to think a…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
Ah ok! Wow, I can’t believe it’s been that long already!
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
woah that means mine must be 2 years too! Where do you see it?
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Esther replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I’m obviously not a guy, but my advice would be to find a happy medium between those two extremes. (Unless he actually would be on one end of the spectrum). Try to think of him as simply a character. Keep in mind that he’s a guy, but don’t get so caught up in that that you give him a reaction that isn’t consistent with his per…[Read more]
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