Felicity

@rae  @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h @ellette-giselle

I posted my character description above! Sorry guys, I for some reason didn’t realize I was supposed to tag everybody.

@rae ahh makes sense. I mean, I don’t think I have a noticeable accent but I chop off the g’s and whatnot when talking sometimes, so I think I’d type my own speech pattern like that too.

ooh interesting! I like that idea, it’s unique. I think it’d be a cool idea that if you’re planning to publish this book/series, to include a guidebook with…[Read more]

@rae I’m ok with that! As long as you stay within the KP guidelines (like, no excessive gore or anything lol) I’m sure it’ll be fine.

@ellette-giselle Considering that you are 18 and fine with early marriage, I trust you when you write about that stuff. I now know you’re not just a 14-year-old thinking that 17-year-olds are super mature compared to you.

You don’t need to change the story in any way. It’s your story, and like I said, my mom was married at 17 and her…[Read more]

@rae ahhh ok sounds really cool.

maybe they just like wearing those hats. I mean, look at him, who doesn’t think that looks cool? I’ve wanted a hat like that since before I ever discovered where it came from.

Also, that style of “hat with brim all the way around” is kinda standard issue if you’re in a hot climate (I mean, think fishing hats…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thanks!! 😀

@smiley

Awww girl thank you so much 😭😭 what better goal is there as a creative than to make other people cry 😭😭

XDXD yes! I just rewatched civil war and it made me emotional 😭😭

@ellette-giselle oooh yeah I’ve always liked that culture’s style too.

cause like American fiction defaults to sticking a slouch hat on a character when they want to make him obviously Australian, or at least a guy from a desert-y kinda place.

@rae ooh yeah definitely. Hat and all.

What was his nationality?

@esther-c

Yw! I’m glad to be of help! 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

Ah, gotcha. 😁

Awww, they look so cuteeee!! 😍🥰

@mineralizedwritings

No that actually is really helpful! I like the perspective you gave. Thank you!! 😊

@esther-c

Well, I’m not sure this will be too helpful for you, but hopefully you get something from it.

It’s my personal opinion that our stories grow with our character. I don’t like to assume what other people’s lives have been. Just because somebody comes across one way doesn’t mean their life has been easy or hard, or in the middle.

Most…[Read more]

@keilah-h

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I don’t think I’m gonna be a part of it because I already put in my two cents.

@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle I feel like this story forum isn’t the best place for that though.

I think one of you should tag the others in a status update and go at it there. Discussing it here is just gonna ruin the experience of anyone who’s just trying to read the story and has to sift through 3 pages of arguing about a…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings haha I will!

Sometime……