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Active 2 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@linus-smallprint you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@loopylin @the_lost-journal eyyyyy fellow Portal people
I still haven’t played it cause my computer is as potato as GLaDOS in the last half of the game but we’ve been watching a ton of playthroughs lol
I built him a Wheatley model out of Legos.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
also help guys I accidentally got my brother really into the Portal games and now he’s writing “the cake is a lie” on his schoolwork
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
@highscribeofaetherium I totally understand.
yes he’s super cute lol, my parents just found him at a store while they were running errands and bought him for me and my brother cause they know we love fidgets
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
This is Squooshy.His name is quite accurate.
We do not know what he is made of. He may or may not be radioactive. [not in reality lol]
He is friends with a small blue-tinted slinky. No one has the heart to tell him it’s a slinky and thus doesn’t have feelings.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
now, living for them, I would do. The not-courage thing only extends to dying. All those other things, maybe, but I wouldn’t exactly know if I were doing it for my family, for myself, for someone else, if you know what I mean…?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Think Twice About Character Death! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@whalekeeper hmmm, you make good points.
@loopylin wow, this is gonna be hard. I might take it though.
@theducktator yeah, KOTLC….really straddles the line of “This is amazing” and “This completely stinks” when it comes to writing and plot. The worldbuilding, or at least most of it, is awesome though.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
That sounds horrible and selfish, and I’m so sorry, but I really didn’t intend it to be.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@the_lost-journal I wanna say yes, and if it really came down to that I might.
but at the same time, I have a much, much stronger aversion to death than most people I know. For example, i live in Florida (not saying where specifically for safety reasons), and there are LOTS of thunderstorms in many places in the state. If I so much as see a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
One, you used the word “fell” twice in one sentence referring to the pen.
Oof. Yup. I did.
Brin and Brinni are the same person.
Krazsimir and Kras are the same….
who is Vrati? Is he a third character?
Yes, yes, and yes. I’ll make a note on the doc.
Thank you!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@koshka that scene was awesome!!
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
@godlyfantasy12 @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @anyoneelse @MGfantasylovers @honestlydon’tknowwhototag
*Tumbles in through the window*
Hi y’all! So, Project Gold Heart (aka the series Zlati and Vulka are in) has been renamed and is currently being drafted (Lord willing and I don’t dump this by June)
For…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Interesting how he seems to have a connection to the other characters. I do agree his name blends in with the others’ but that’s not a bad thing, nor do you need to change it, that’s just me failing to pay attention lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.
I’m late but tell her happy birthday!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint yeah, it’s just a first draft, those are never, ever perfect. Some can get close to how the end story is, but there’s inevitably gonna have to be at least one scene you cut, one set of dialogue you rework, one characters whose role changes, etc.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
also I had video game soundtracks on in the background while I was doing schoolwork and this one decided to come on right as I started reading and hit the part when they discover the ruined university…..
…one of like three or four orchestral songs in that entire playlist, and oddly fitting too. Funny how that always happens. No matter what…[Read more]
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