FeedingMyGoldfish

I’m studying, but I’ll be on soon to…worldbuild, outline, character build…all the stuff that sets up a new story. @dragon-snapper

@emily @shannon @salome01w4g @daeus @catwing @daughteroftheking
I’m worldbuilding at the moment.

@michael-stanton *nods* Of course, of course…that makes sense. Poor underlings.

Aloha @radically-surrendered! Me and my dinosaur Aberdeen welcome you to the bestistiest place on the internet! What other languages can you speak (that’s awesome that you know so many)? 🙂

Rogue One is awesome too.

Guys. Just. Guys.

The never-ending discussion.

Kylo Ren is awesome.

@daeus Looks good. *thumbs up*

Kylo Ren is the worst…

@xonos-darkgrate FINALLY! Someone who agrees with me. (@kate-flournoy and @daeus think he’s awesome for some reason…) 😉

I’m just gonna…let everyone else talk. My brain is fried…

@jess-penrose

Well, the version of a synopsis I know is a maximum of 10 page summary of a book that describes the plot, characters, message, world and the writer’s thoughts. Soooo… I assume these are slightly different things in Australia. That’s all.

That’s my definition of a synposis too…I mean, that’s a good reason for writer’s to hate…[Read more]

@daeus I agree about the last sentence/paragraph thing (and most of what the others said about rewording throughout). I don’t think the whole thing should be dumped, but particularly just the last sentence sounds sort of pushy and/or excluding or something along those lines. If you were to cut it, it might need replacing with something else, but I…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield That’s great! It’s really cute. 😀

@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.

@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.

@emily That sunset picture is pretty.

@rolena-hatfield I have a blog: http://www.thetinytealtypewriter.com Thanks for giving me the opportunity to share it. 😊

@shannon Ooh! Palm trees! Where does this story take place? 🙂

@raevynstar Oh…yeah….that would make a Labrador a problem. 😛

@daeus *dances* Yay! Destruction to telling!

@daeus
Well, big thoughts is mainly that you should take out the last paragraph, because although you’re trying to appeal with struggles like that, people might not want to think of themselves as weak or cowardly, if you know what I mean. Maybe they know that subconsciously, but who wants to admit that they are a coward? I mean, a Christian might…[Read more]

@jess-penrose XD Yeah, that’s my thoughts. 😀 You might have noticed I have very strong opinions on these things. 😛