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@jess

disappears in flames

That’s a new one. Cool!

@aysia-serene

Oh yeah! Ascendance Trilogy! Her books inspired most of my writing. Sage is definitely the best of the two, though I haven’t read hardly any of the Mark of the Thief books. Which of the three books is your favorite? Mine is probably The Runaway King, but the False Prince is…[Read more]

Hmmm… Maybe you should tell Marvel they stole your idea then you can do it. 😛
To rouse the people more than just spying, maybe the government promises something more than protection. Money, protection, free cars, something they may want. They could also threaten the people to help…you know, ‘or else’ kinda thing.

@aysia-serene Wait!!!!! Did you say you like Jennifer A. Nielson??? YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! Which books?
So, you sound a lot like me. Homeschooled. Laughing at your own jokes. I do too. Drawing. Awesome; I sketch. I’ve been writing to three years too!! And really, medieval based fantasy! Same! And I love cookies.
In other…[Read more]

@Abigail-blomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!

@Abigailblomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!

@perfectfifths Happy New Year! (I am going to be so tired today for staying up till 12 and past) *yawn*

Thanks @PerfectFifths.
Ours is in half an hour, and we’re staying up to meet it. 🙂 Some of us. 😉

Thanks @Perfect-Fifths.
Ours is in half an hour, and we’re staying up to meet it. 🙂 Some of us. 😉

@Rolena-Hatfield Well, there could be no singing Christian songs; no songs with mention of God; maybe all documents with God mentioned banned even if they weren’t particularly Christian works (things like the Constitution, maybe?)…
That all seems a little basic. 😛 I can’t really think what else would happen other than the banning of all…[Read more]

@Winter-Rose That is awesome!
Make sure you get your sleep. 🙂

@Alia I’ll be praying.

Very good.

@Daeus It’s perfect. As long as web works grammatically with ‘a deep uncertainty’.

Web! That works nicely, doesn’t it?

@Daeus @Kate-Flournoy

@Kate-Flournoy Oh, subtlety? Hmmm…

@Kate-Flournoy Oh, sublety? Hmmm…

War-zone makes it sound like a WWII story.

@Daeus Myself is most sorry. *cringe* I didn’t remember who said to change it, but maybe that doesn’t work grammatically (why doesn’t ‘plummets into tangled plots work’ though?) …so do what yourself’s brain suggests. Critics aren’t for making you do what they want, after all, but for suggesting. 😛

@Daeus I wasn’t thinking the font should be changed, just really toned down in color; I had meant for the design under the title when I said something more angular.
I suppose it could work the same way to change the font to something more angular…in fact that might be better ’cause I like sub-title design.
Of those fonts you linked I think…[Read more]

@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.

And actually, reading the other one again, I like it better as ‘plummets’, without the…[Read more]

@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.