FeedingMyGoldfish

Chapter Three:
As I walk briskly down the hall, the lights above me dim. The flickering bulbs cast an eerie, ominous splash of ashy gray on the pale walls. My footsteps are the only sound I hear.
Clip, thump, clip, thump, clip, thump.
“Is he insane?!”
Well. That escalated quickly.
The sudden shout makes my heart leap into my chest, and…[Read more]

I need help. *glances wearily at the novel excerpt forum so we don’t disturb @daeus*
@kate-flournoy

I need help. *glances wearily at the novel excerpt forum so we don’t disturb @daeus*

Excellent point. @daeus

Ugh. I’m trying to write, but my brain is full of ideas and I can’t quite make sense of them all. Kate, dear, are you on? @kate-flournoy

I thought you’d come back already. No apparating inside of Kingdom Pen, @Daeus !

I LOVE IT. @kate-flournoy

Aw…poor @daeus …feeling left out, are we?

The wonderful @kate-flournoy has graced the Writing Corner with her presence! *cue applause*

Of course, Kate. Anything for my favorite Force-wielding telepathic dragon.

Wow. *jaw drops* Is that a snippet from your WIP? @kate-flournoy

Alright. @daeus

Me too. @daeus

Boom. Kate wisdom. Love it. @kate-flournoy

*looks over your shoulder* Where can I buy one of those guides? @graciegirl

On a side note, I’ve decided to start calling you Jedi-Master Kate. @kate-flournoy

Not really.

I…*sighs* Have you ever seen the animated TV show “Avatar: The Last Airbender”? The “bending” on that show is based off of four different forms of Chinese martial arts. That’s how I’m picturing the Elemental powers–what they’ll be like–will be used.
Kara uses fire as an extension of her body. It’s a part of her she can’t even…[Read more]

Is it bad if I know who my “ONE character” is, even though he hasn’t entered the story yet? @graciegirl

Also, their conversation would be a great way to say a lot of things about the way things really are in the prison by not saying them. Good dialogue illuminates what people are not saying, I’ve heard it said, and I agree. There’s more in what’s not said than what is.

Huh. Good point, but…things like what? @kate-flournoy Also, thank you for s…[Read more]

Kate, I’m popping over to the novel excerpt forum to read your reply. I had work this morning, so I couldn’t answer when you commented. @kate-flournoy

I’d be careful if I were you. If Kate’s character is anything like her maker, she’ll be mischievous… @graciegirl

@GracieGirl Oh, definitely. I’ll be praying. Aren’t moms amazing though?!