Faith Kindred

@Daeus *sniffs* You forgot to tag me.
But looks like I’m first to the party anyway, so here goes. XD

First off, I really like it. The only suggestions I have are a few tweaks to the wording.

The first line, I think, would be better as simply ‘Trevor is in a mess. After traveling back in time, he and his sister are now…’ etc. It leaves out…[Read more]

Tags. @josiahdeboer @xonos-darkgrate @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @graciegirl @salome01w4g @epicaddie2 @catwing @that_writer_girl_99 @shannon

@that_writer_girl_99 will continue. 😉

@mariposa
Yeah, the title is actually Substitute which is the meaning of Jaclyn’s name. 🙂

@the-real-kapeefer Actually, according to your profile picture you don’t even /have/ arms, so no, you don’t have any 2nd Amendment rights here.

@raevynstar *nods* Totally valid reason. 😉

@Rolena-Hatfield that’s awesome! I like the color scheme. 😀

@raevynstar heyyyyyy! I’m an INFP too. 😀 Welcome to KP; so glad to have you here. I’m a poet (of sorts 😛 ) as well. Why do you like poetry?

@raevynstar Welcome to the site! Glad you found us. 🙂 What’s the premise of your current work-in-progress?

Here’s another one I made. This is the protagonist of my WIP, Jaclyn Fallows.

@raevynstar
Hey there! *tries to think of a good get-to-know-you question* Hmmm…are you a dog or a cat person? 😉

@xonos-darkgrate I’m sure it would. It would be cool to give a bad guy a subplot too.

@xonos-darkgrate By sub-plots, I basically mean adding in side characters with their own intertwining stories. I also mean how the main events John Huss experiences affect the many different areas of his life. For instance, you could build a subplot around a book he is writing, or a friendship he has with a small child, or a theological dilemma…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate That sounds like a great idea. You might want to read the book Trial And Triumph. It’s a novel about John Huss, and I really liked it. I would also highly recommend you read Rora. It’s a real-life story of a Waldensian resistance fighter with added details to bring it to life. It might give you some ideas, especially on how to…[Read more]

@raevynstar He sounds good to me. 😀 The one thing I would point out is that sometimes writers will make these types of characters mopey. It’s fine for characters to be sorrowful and introspective, but they must have a strong goal they are pursuing at the same time, or it will be hard to root for them.

@dragon-snapper That’s right. You got it.

Haha! You’re too quick! I just realized someone already asked you that, so I went to ask something else, but you’d already answered! hehe 🙂 Anyway, I’ve never heard of them. I’ll have to look them up!

@raevynstar Welcome to Kingdom Pen! I’m just venturing into the Sci-fi genre. 🙂

Do you have any pets and what’s your favorite kind of ice cream?