Faith Kindred

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
I have a question: are you looking for a name for the individual books in the trilogy? I may have missed that…

Yeah, I kinda like that too. But I don’t think that’s how it’s going to turn out, what with all the mystery and stuff in her backstory. :/

I hope Rey remains just a normal person. I like that she’s a nobody.

Oh and Hannah, yes. Finn did change the way I saw Stormtroopers very much.

@His-Instrument @Daeus I totally agree with everything that has been said. (Like you needed my stamp of approval. I’m giving it anyway).
And yes, Hannah, I totally root for Gollum. Don’t worry. We’re weird together. 😉

The thing I’m most worried about with Ren is the general incompetence of script-writers. (I know. So cynical). This character…[Read more]

@bluejay Great poem, again! I really do love it. The varying length of the lines creates a beautiful sort of rhythm while you’re reading. I usually prefer rhyming poetry, but you pulled this off really well. Keep up the great work! 🙂

@his-instrument I can agree that Gollum and Javert are both great bad guys. Not Kylo Ren, but still really good.

Whatever they do with Kylo Ren, it needs to be complex. Absolutely no way can he turn out to be a full bad guy. Something as simple as Vader’s redemption however would simply fall flat for him. I think his mental commitment and actions…[Read more]

@lightningmouse Ooo, those are cool. I love 1st, 2nd, and 4th one especially. I wish I could draw my own characters that well. *sighs* I guess I’ll settle for pinterest. What type of story is this?

I messaged you, @anna-brie but it told me Aella94 wasn’t a username…

Okay, I’m also going to post about Fin. He just completely threw off the way I viewed Storm Troopers. It’s easy to hate a sea of bad guys whose faces you can’t see. You think they’re just clones– maybe not even fully human– and so it doesn’t bother you to see people shooting them and blasting them. But then, suddenly, here’s a Storm Trooper with…[Read more]

@Daeus @Kate-Flournoy Thank you for putting all of my thoughts on Kylo Ren into words. I don’t know if Ren is my favorite bad guy, but he’s definitely up there. Gollum is close. If anybody understands me on that one I’d love to hear that I’m not the only person in the universe who was actually rooting for Gollum and his redemption. And then…[Read more]

My NaNo username was either eyeonthesparrow or eyeonthesparrow2 on YWP. I’m not on the main NaNo site yet. I haven’t been on that account for years! I’ll have to dig it up again. 🙂

I don’t know whether or not that’s true, @sarah-h, but it sounds like an excellent theory. You’re right about how John almost hides his identity.
I love the scene where Philip and Nathanael are introduced. The dialogue exchanged by them sort of carries across their characters. Nathanael obviously has some prejudices (“Nazareth! Can anything good…[Read more]

I like it. But I do agree with @Sarah-h. Polite, doesn’t quite seem to fit with gentleness. Maybe placid or quiet.

I looked up about forms of poetry and it’s rather similar to a cinquain, but that has the fourth line longest.

@sarah-h I’d love to read it. I am really beginning to like visual poetry. As Daeus pointed out, this one wasn’t visual poetry, but I’m going to keep trying.

Bah. It didn’t work. Well, you can see one of them here if you want to. Unfortunately, I don’t have the other one online currently.
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-cloud-and-earth/

@bluejay Yeah, I like it. Focusing on symbolism could make it even better, but it’s good.

Actually though, I wouldn’t call this one visual poetry. Visual poetry is where you write a normal poem, but the way the words are arranged forms an image. For instance, you could write a poem about your ancestors in the shape of a tree. Your one about the…[Read more]

@bluejay Yeah, I like it. Focusing on symbolism could make it even better, but it’s good.

Actually though, I wouldn’t call this one visual poetry. Visual poetry is where you write a normal poem, but the way the words are arranged forms an image. For instance, you could write a poem about your ancestors in the shape of a tree. Your one about the…[Read more]

@bluejay YASSSSSSSSSS! ALWAYS SUBMIT!

As far as ideas go, you could totally do a series of poems on the miracles of Jesus. That would be really awesome. 🙂