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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Oh, oh, oh! You have to mention butterflies wielding timesabers at some point!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
“You only ever show up to tell me things I don’t want to hear!”
This has got to be my new motto. xD Nicely done. I laughed while reading it.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 5 months ago
@Aratrea The 19th won’t work, but the 21st, afternoon or evening would.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 5 months ago
Analyzing other stories for theme lessons that you can apply to your own stories is an awesome course of action to take. Since last summer, I’ve kept an excel sheet of all the stories I’ve read/watched and the storytelling applications I can glean from them, and that’s been incredibly helpful in my own journey as a writer.
I’m always thrilled to…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 13: Theme & Antagonist in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
@jenali Awesome–thanks for making all that clear. Those look like good foils. I especially like the potential for interplay you have within the antagonists, specifically thinking about Manel and Tekal’s similar views on loyalty. Does Manel take a similar course of action to Tekal (giving gifts) to obtain loyalty, or does he use a different tack?…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 5 months ago
Thanks for letting me know what works for you all! Sounds like it’s harder to find a good date for everyone this time around. By any chance, would the 19th or the 21st at the same time work any better? If enough people say by Sunday night that one of those times would work better, we’ll do that. Otherwise, we’ll do the 13th or…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
@jenali Detailing those physical consequences there helps to clarify the poetic justice on that front. Looks good!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 10: Theme & Scene Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
@jenali Ah–sorry for not seeing this before! Thanks for the tag. Both of those look great!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eleven: Scene to Story Structure in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jenali Got it. Thanks for the feedback!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper, @jane-maree should be a super stereotypical Australian with neat Aussie way of saying things.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-sapper, @jane-maree should be a super stereotypical Australian with neat Aussie way of saying things.
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@gideon-sowdon Kind of, I think…… It seems that he’s suggesting that the only type of writing really worth doing is a gig type thing where someone needs sales text and you provide it. …Which is really weird for someone on librivox. The part “as for that other kind of writing: that’s not how it works. Good luck” makes no sense to me, unless…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@audrey-caylin True, we are partnered. I guess I’ll go talk to them about it. Thanks for the info about Go Teen Writers.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Aratrea my future course? Since I’ve already gone through all my next ten ideas and mapped out their themes in excruciating detail, I suppose you mean more futurely than that… um… continue? XD Pick other stories to pieces and keep learning and applying as I do, hopefully.
Seriously. There are no words for how amazing this was. I am…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Nineteen: Tying Theme Together in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Aratrea my future course? Since I’ve already gone through all my next ten ideas and mapped out their themes in excruciating detail, I suppose you mean more futurely than that… um… continue? XD Pick other stories to pieces and keep learning and applying as I do, hopefully.
Seriously. There are no words for how amazing this was. I am…[Read more]
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Julia R. replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus: amylynn9@live.com here you go! Tell her you’re a friend of Hannah and Julia R., with whom she has had dinner with and sent 19th century letters to, and maybe she won’t be weirded out. She’s a pretty easygoing person, so you should be fine. I’m sure she’d be happy to share your survey! And if she’s not, then, well, it was worth a shot.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper A villain’s minions who are great shots. Also a petition to include @Michael-stanton as the evil overlord. And possibly give Josiah a brother who contradicts him at every turn and is obsessed with hair-styles (all kinds on everybody). XD
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @dragon-snapper @jess @jane-maree I’ll be writing for an hour.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *bows, flourishes cape* Awesome is after all our job description. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 5 months ago
@audrey-caylin Ok, so I checked out the go teen writers blog. Could you explain a little more about what you were thinking? Were you suggesting I ask them to do a post for me? Email their subscribers? Also, I’m not exactly sure what they do. Do they just provide articles about how to write? And are they a Christian organization?
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